Masyn

@adry_grace

After a while I begin to laugh

Maybe cut out “after a while” here.

It’l be okay.

I think that’s supposed to be “it’ll.” 😉

Just like that her voice breaks.

I would take out “just like that.”

But the choice is yours too make

“Too make” would be “to make.” 😉

but sure enough I find her walking by my side.

I’d take out “sure e…[Read more]

Thank you all. My next stop motion is going to have less movement I promise. It’s also going to have mouth movement. 🙂 😀 🙂
@writefury Could you find out what camera your brother used? The quality looks really good.

Ok @daeus See you tomorrow.

@Daeus you won’t be. Things are not always as they seem… and even someone as simple and straightforward as Boffin can have a few tricks up their sleeve. 😉

I can’t say anymore. Finish the book.

@writefury Wonderful poem! I like it. 🙂

@Daeus… *mysterious smile* You’ll be very glad to hear that your outrage is totally for nothing. Finish the book. Believe me. I know why this happened— but in the end you figure it out. Don’t worry. You don’t need to be mad at Dickens.

Finish the book.

Tag – @anna-brie

Ok, so I wrote for half an hour to make up for it. I’m writing a poem for the comp and got 124 words written. I’m pretty please with that as poetry is not my “thing.” It does get easier the more I do it though.
And I’m sorry again. 🙁 I’ll try to do better tomorrow. Do you want to write 12-1? *I will remember* Let’s just blame @daeus. He’s…[Read more]

I’m so sorry @anna-brie. I forgot!!!! 😮 *cries really hard.* I got occupied with my sister’s school work and did a few jobs for mum and then realized that I’d missed. So very sorry. 🙁 *wails miserably*
I can write later if you want to write with me. *falls to the ground in desolation* **How could I forget?!?!?!?!**

@anna-brie What about 4:15-4:45? If not 4:30 will be ok, but I might stop a bit before 5. Depends when we’re having tea.

@anna-brie Just letting you know that I won’t be able to write this afternoon as I’m out till 4pm. If you want to write after that, let me know. 🙂

344 Haha I beat!!!! 😛 *eats cookies* See what you’ve started me doing @daeus. I can’t stop eating cookies. 😀

Wait up! *puff puff* I’m here. Ready. Set. *realizes you’ve already gone.* Goes.

@daeus

Oooooh *excited whisper* cookie cookie cookie… I love da cookie…

@bluejay

What they said @writefury. 🙂

And I love this— it’s a classic example of everything I cannot do. It’s simple but powerful, cute but touching, and above all lean and to the point. Excellent work!