MarkMcGuire

@That_Writer_Girl_99

@Daeus it just doesn’t like me. 😀

Okay @Daeus my post does not appear to be showing up. My guess is it got spammed.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 wow, that took an unexpected turn. 😛 I love it. Good job with the prose. 😉
You’re right though, the shift in Matthias is pretty obvious.
And… that might actually be a problem. It’s perfectly fine for him to change his personality as you write him; that’s not what I’m worried about. It’s that the Matthias we meet first and…[Read more]

@That_Writer_Girl_99 wow, that took an unexpected turn. 😛 I love it. Good job with the prose. 😉
You’re right though, the shift in Matthias is pretty obvious.
And… that might actually be a problem. It’s perfectly fine for him to change his personality as you write him; that’s not what I’m worried about. It’s that the Matthias we meet first and…[Read more]

@That-Writer_Girl_99 wow, that took an unexpected turn. 😛 I love it. Good job with the prose. 😉
You’re right though, the shift in Matthias is pretty obvious.
And… that might actually be a problem. It’s perfectly fine for him to change his personality as you write him; that’s not what I’m worried about. It’s that the Matthias we meet first and…[Read more]

@That_Writer_Girl_99 well I’m here now. XD *folds hands primly**ahem* You had a question?

Well, I don’t really know about many contests myself that you could enter (though I heard of an annual short story writing contest awhile ago I forgot most of the stuff about it. I’ll get back to you when I find it 🙂 ), but I’d advise looking in official places for them (college websites, Writer’s Digest magazine (…[Read more]

Thanks! Looks cool. I think I’ll submit something, maybe 🙂

After a rather unsuccessful serve, Faith looks over to @bethanysinkyroses, cringing at the sound of a window breaking. “Woops…” I hope they have insurance…
Waving her arms frantically, she calls over to Bethany. “Take a right, walk straight until you reach the big tree with the purple leaves, turn left, past the virtual ice cream stand, take…[Read more]

*shakes head* You guys… XD

@That_Writer_Girl_99 YAY!!! *tackles you and smothers you in blankets and pillows* We knew you could do it! Way to go! *fuscia confetti*

@Dragon-Snapper lol! XD

@That_Writer_Girl_99 nope. Not yet. I want to get him good and proper in my head before I try it. 😉

@Anne-Of-Lothlorien too late. 😀

@That_Writer_Girl_99 yep. And thoughts are actually the least necessary of those three. Oftentimes I just cut them out and let the actions tell the story. Emotions and actions go a long way to cluing people in on what someone’s thinking. 😉 😛

Yeah… maybe it means easy as eating pie? XD

@That_Writer_Girl_99 *hugs you*

Thanks @DelightInLife. 😀 It took me forever to get that actually… :/

@That_Writer_Girl_99

I didn’t write that, and I don’t think I can right now. I’m not that good.

*wise Yoda look* That— is why you fail.

*goes off into gales of smothered laughter* Okay, okay… so it’s not that drastic. I have a reputation to live up to apparently, though, so… *shrugs*

No, you’ve got enough humility to sink a ship.…[Read more]

@Daeus awesome. I got 506 words written. 🙂 See ya.