MarkMcGuire

@That_Writer_Girl_99 meh. Logic. Who cares about logic? 😛

Forget the logic for a sec. What is the most natural emotional course for the characters? Go wild. Not even kidding.
And one question that might give you some answers— what is the Warden going to do with Blake? What are they saying/doing, locked up in that office together?

*pulls out sword pen and sticks it behind her ear* How can I help?

@That_Writer_Girl_99

Oooooh, I like it!

There is one thing that could use tweaking though. Both Kara and Matthias seem a little scattered and unfocused as to their emotional state. Now they’re supposed to be; I know. They’re both confused. But the reader shouldn’t be. It’s not that both of them shouldn’t be struggling with several different emotions at once, but that…[Read more]

@That_Writer_Girl_99 don’t think so. Heading over there now.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 *appears in a poof of elvish stardust**adjusts Jedi robes* You wanted to talk about chapter seven?

@jane-maree Still, do you have a favorite?

@kate-flournoy I thought you’d like those ones. They’d help me in cover ideas too.

@dragon-snapper Hmmm, yes. But this title won’t be on the same page as the other titles and the rose is a pretty important element. There might be a little repetition, but I don’t think it’s enough to be jarring.

Thanks for all your help, everyone! I’ll post a few…[Read more]

1. Blackened Rose
2. Bloodstained Crown
3. Broken Seal

Definitely.

@Hope

@bethanysinkyroses Will do. 😀 And yes, I have a blog. It is: https://authorhopeann.com/

@Jess Yes, that is my favorite set too.

Good bye, @winter-rose And good day to you as well, @dragon-snapper. I got most of a fight worked through and now I must leave.

@Winter-rose Have another strawberry.

@dragon-snapper I think you misspelled brown, mushy thingies.

Ignores all mushrooms and eats strawberries by her lonesome.

@dragon-snapper that works too. 😉 I’m going to write until 3:00

I’m going to be writing for about an hour-ish. Anyone up for a word war?

@daeus @dragon-snapper @graciegirl @ethryndal @jess @winter-rose

@mariposa Oooo, yes. That’s a good idea. *scowls at self* seriously, Hope. You have light in the title and don’t once think about using that as a theme?

Thanks so much, everyone. That prompted several cool ideas. So… what do you think? Favorites or changes? I’ve two places I couldn’t decide on a word so I included both.

1. War for Aslaria
2. War for Zahava or Zulema
3. War for Veritas

1. The Sacrifice
2. The Steadfast or Subjection
3. The Subversion

1. Ancient Oath
2. Rejected Pardon
3.…[Read more]

Thanks so much, everyone. That prompted several cool ideas. So… what do you think? Favorites or changes? I’ve two places I couldn’t decide on a word so I included both.

1. War for Aslaria
2. War for Zahava or Zulema
3. War for Veritas

1. The Sacrifice
2. The Steadfast or Subjection
3. The Subversion

1. Ancient Oath
2. Rejected Pardon
3.…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper Yes, it is like a trilogy of three trilogies. Hmmm, I do like the idea of themes as titles. That could be cool. Or a final ‘War’. See, Alsaria is the land and Zahava is the captial city. I could see if I can find another location to center the last three novellas around.

@bethanysinkyroses I only have the first three novellas…[Read more]