@markmcguire
Active 7 years, 10 months ago- Rank: Charismatic Rebel
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Informal Survey in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@Daeus me.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Your Online Notebook here in the forum Characters 8 years, 9 months ago
@devastate-lasting super cool! Thanks for tagging me @Daeus.
The primary reason I use notebooks is so I can have something to jot notes in when I’m not at my computer, but this looks like an awesome program for organizing stuff, which I need lots of help with, 😛 so I’m going to check it out!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Synopsis Nook in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@Sam-Kowal perfect. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Synopsis Nook in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@Sam-Kowal ooh I really like it! Super cool concept. I think I’d definitely pick it up and read it.
On a more writerly note, the synopsis itself is well written, but it does seem a little choppy in places. It may simply be a case of too many fragments. Also, this is bugging me a little and it’s probably just me. But the voice is inconsistent……[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Page Thoughts? in the forum Publishing & Platform 8 years, 9 months ago
@Daeus looks great. The only thing I noticed is a typo at the very end— in the money back section, you said ‘every’ when you meant ‘ever’. Other than that, it’s lovely. 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Better Books Survey in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@Daeus everything looks great. 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Want to read about theme in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@Daeus *raises hand*
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Lightningmouse posted an update 8 years, 9 months ago
CHEESE.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Weird Things People Tell Me 'Cause I'm a Writer in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
Random social stranger at a random social function: “Oh, you write books? Cool! What’s your book about?”
Me, randomly trying to function socially: *stilted grin and shivering, nervous laugh* “Here, let me… let me…” *digs out notebook with a triumphant flourish* “I wrote it down!”
XD
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Weird Things People Tell Me 'Cause I'm a Writer in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper ugh I am so sorry. I have no idea why it does that to you. *offers you conciliatory chocolate*
Yeah… trying to pitch your book on the spur of the moment is torture. Especially if the person is just trying to make conversation and you can tell they really don’t care. And then you walk away from the encounter and think of a dozen…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Weird Things People Tell Me 'Cause I'm a Writer in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@jenwriter17Â my most memorable and embarrassing writerly moment will always be the time I had to explain to the chiropractor that my hip was out of place because I slipped on our hardwood floor choreographing a fight scene… he was very nice about it, but the startled, slightly skeptical sidelong look he gave me, and the funny little laugh,…[Read more]
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Lightningmouse replied to the topic Burn the Castles (Story Synopsis/Back Cover copy–Would you read this?) in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 9 months ago
Yep, he does and he is! His cousin (who is older than him by some years) accidentally helped him realize the corruption when he arrested Rafe’s parents for treason (or similar; still working that out) when Rafe was young. Rafe has a position in the government because of his relations, but is actually just doing what he’s told by them as a…[Read more]
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Lightningmouse started the topic Burn the Castles (Story Synopsis/Back Cover copy–Would you read this?) in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 9 months ago
Hi there fellow KePeefers! I’m sorry I’ve been absent from here a lot; I’m doing college courses and don’t have too much free time at the moment.
But I have some now, and have been using it to work on my latest WIP. It’s called Burnt he Castles (BtC for short), and I was wondering if you guys would look at it and tell me what you think! Here it…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic I need help… my character is too withdrawn in the forum Characters 8 years, 9 months ago
@Bella-D *salutes* Happy to be of service! 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic I need help… my character is too withdrawn in the forum Characters 8 years, 9 months ago
@Bella-D it would appear I have been summoned. Thank you @daeus. 🙂
Let me see… there are a number of potential answers to this question. The one that ended up being the answer for me isn’t so much about changing the side of the character that is reserved, brooding, and unresponsive, but about developing a second side to balance it— the one…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@Sam-Kowal I know! Crazy. I love it. 😛
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