@markmcguire
Active 5 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Charismatic Rebel
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Brainstorm Help: Supervolacoes, ravens, and ping pong balls in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
@bethanysinkyroses that would be @sierra-r and I have forgotten Cindy’s as well. 😛
The first thing that strikes me as I read your summary here is that you’ve focused a lot on symbolism.
That’s a good thing. But it can also be a hindrance. In my experience, when I focus too much on the symbolism of a thing, it comes out one-dimensional as only…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic *Stereotype Alert* in the forum Characters 7 years, 1 month ago
@warrioroftherealm no character is ever cliche if they are approached as a person with a logical reason for being who and where they are in life. It sounds like this woman has a very good reason for being ‘strong’.
At the same time, I think ‘strong woman’ is frequently misunderstood or misinterpreted. A strong woman is not a masculine woman. A…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
@winter-rose I blame @xonos-darkgrate‘s profile pic. XD
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Diaster in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 1 month ago
@salome01w4g yikes. D: I’m glad everything worked out.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
@catwing lol. XD
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Fairy Tale Retelling in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
Yeah, @Hope‘s definitely the one to ask if you have fairytale questions. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Fairy Tale Retelling in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
@jess-penrose this looks like a very solid idea. However, the one thing that’s sticking out to me is that you have no plot twists. There are no reveals— no changing of the scene or forcing existing scenes to be viewed in different lights.
One of the reasons for this is that Taryn has one goal to pursue throughout the entire story and it’s the…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
@catwing THAT’S IT. I LOVE YOUR OPTIMISM. KEEP IT UP. DO NOT SUCCUMB TO THE DARK SIDE.
I may or may not actually have half a dozen scenarios worked up in my head about how his redemption arc could go… and how the moviemakers could ruin it. *scowls*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
@graciegirl nope, the fact that they died was my fave thing too. *nods*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 7 years, 1 month ago
@catwing whoa, pretty cool.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
@lifeofkatie well to be fair I never claimed to be sane. *raises eyebrows*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
@salome01w4g I was being sarcastic, if that’s what you’re asking. 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
@salome01w4g *smirks* praise indeed. XD
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
@xonos-darkgrate @dragon-snapper *kicks back and grins* You guys are totally entitled to your opinions. Far be it from me to take that from you. By all means— miss out. That makes him all mine. *evil cackling*
XD @Dragon-snapper you and I’ve been over this before. @xonos-darkgrate, just know that I have observed that among those who watched The…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
@salome01w4g yeah, kinda the point. XD
No, The Force Awakens is amazing. You have to see it. *doesn’t say anything else*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
@xonos-darkgrate @salome01w4g @daeus agreed, Krennic is awesome. Favorite character… eh. I can’t pick. 😛 Probably Cassian. I love K2 though.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
@xonos-darkgrate YES. Oh please, don’t get me started. It’s got to be one of my favorite movies ever, and I’m really picky too.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
@XonosDarkgrate are you a Rogue One fan???
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Lightningmouse and Joseph Darkgrate are now friends 7 years, 1 month ago
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
@Daeus yep. Nailed it.
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