@mark-kamibaya
Active 7 years, 7 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Does it Have to be Long? in the forum Plotting 8 years, 5 months ago
@sam-kowal Yeah, Dalinar’s character arc was amazing. Didn’t think Sanderson could top Kaladin’s in WoR, but he pretty much matched it. Yeah, Adolin seemed to get away with that, and I was also looking for some closure on the moral questions being raised regarding the morality of war. I suspect, though, that Sanderson at least plans on continuing…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Does it Have to be Long? in the forum Plotting 8 years, 5 months ago
For a first time author, avoid going over 120k; 130k max if you absolutely have to. Once you become published, you can push the limit more (I just finished a 450k fantasy work that topped the NY bestselling list), but publishers aren’t willing to risk those sorts of word counts for unpublished authors.
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Daeus replied to the topic Does it Have to be Long? in the forum Plotting 8 years, 5 months ago
Oh, wait, you already asked Kate this question. WHY!?
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Daeus replied to the topic Does it Have to be Long? in the forum Plotting 8 years, 5 months ago
@dragon-snapper The max? Hahahahaha!
Oh, dear. The max, you say. Well, I don’t know if there is a max. 😉 Probably very few people if any have ever written a 1,000,000 word fantasy novel, but I will say that the trilogy I’m working on is looking like it will end up that long.
And whatever you do, don’t ask Kate this question!
Fantasy stories…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@Winter-Rose Wow… that’s a tough decision, but super exciting. My brother has grappled with the choice of college himself, and I know how hard it can be. It’s incredibly brave of you to buck the traditional, pressured paths of society to pursue writing, and I’ll definitely be praying for you. May God strengthen and encourage you through this…[Read more]
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Snapper started the topic Does it Have to be Long? in the forum Plotting 8 years, 5 months ago
So….I’ve heard a lot about fantasy novels being long, but Iv’e never written anything longer than 85,000 thousand words. Anything that was going to be longer than that I never finished. So I’ve been wondering…how long is the max for fantasy novels?
@daeus @aratrea @kate-flournoy @shannon @any and all fantasy people…
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic FEEDBACK HELP NEEDED! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@inkling-for-christ I would love to read you work, if you still want feedback. But may I make a suggestion? Reading it in a post like this is a bit hard, and makes it tricky to comment on what might need revising. If you could put it in a Google Doc and share the link with us on Suggest mode, that would give us the ability to highlight sections to…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Discussion for Video Two: The Importance of Theme in the forum Discussion Questions 8 years, 5 months ago
@dragon-snapper What @daeus said. 🙂 Feel free to pop by again if you have any additional questions after watching it!
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Homework for Videos 6-8: Developing Character Arcs in the forum Writing Assignments 8 years, 5 months ago
@sleepwalkingmk I think that’s a really good idea. Three EiLs are hard to fit into one book, so splitting it into two books seems like a wise move!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #11 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@jane-maree @jess-penrose @dekreel @shannon @emily @seekjustice @epicaddie2
I’m characterizing.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@Dekreel too many ideas and getting too excited and determined about finishing them all and saving the world by Thursday, Friday at the latest. 😛
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Snapper replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@dekreel Yes! It was perfect! 😀
Anyway, I wouldn’t say mine is procrastination with writing, but that I’m perfect. Yes. I have no weaknesses whatsoever. 😉 Okay, actually, it’s probably uh….ummm…Yeah, you know what, I don’t have any weaknesses.
Dekreel, do you have any suggestions? Something that would be helpful in the story? -
Snapper replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@dekreel
Procrastination eh?

😉Anyway — the idea of having each writer with their own villain is cool but I also think that you’re right about the army. Not to mention it might take a lot of extensive work to think up each and every villain. Plus, I’d like to stick together. 😉 And that way, if you have the shapeshifter villain, it can…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Snapper Synopsis in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@emily @dekreel @sam-kowal @daughteroftheking @perfectfifths @introvert_girl @ingridrd
Thanks guys!! I’m so excited to write this!
But why, why oh why does world building and the other things have to take so long? 😉
Stan…..I don’t think that the king will let you have a Dragonfly Kiwi. I’m a dragon and he won’t even let me have one. :(…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic And for "Gosh-sakes", watch your language! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@xonos-darkgrate I’m going to stick with my opinions from the previous discussion that @daeus mentioned. I don’t think that you should have them.
1. Not only do they infiltrate other people, but it’ll also get stuck in your head. I find that the more I hear them, the more I think them. And even if they aren’t “that bad” they still make me…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic And for "Gosh-sakes", watch your language! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@xonos-darkgrate I basically side with @kate-flournoy, though I don’t think that swear words cannot ever ever be used.
We had a discussion on this before you might want to read. https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/coarse-language/
Basically, my position is that you should try as hard as you can not to use any swear words and that the majority o…[Read more]
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Rolena Hatfield replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@winter-rose I am so thrilled for you!!! And overjoyed that you’ll be writing more. And proud of you for taking this scary step. And I can’t wait to see where God takes you. And I’ll be praying for you. 🙂
Much excitement for you!!!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
*stares at topic* I swear this thing is rearranging itself as we speak. My reply is now below your post. I have no idea what’s going on. XD
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@Winter-rose something odd happened and your post wasn’t here when I got the notification, so my reply is above your post and I accidentally tagged Hannah… 😛 *winces* sorry…
Anyway… THAT’S SO AWESOME!! *tackle hugs* Definitely be praying.
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Daeus replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@winter-rose Do I ever feel for you. Quitting the standard, laid out path to go write has got to be one of the most disorienting, frustrating, wonderful things ever.
I have no idea what it will be like for you, but I do know that.
1. God is faithful
2. Writing is awesome
3. You’ll never be the sameHave a cookie 🍪 😀
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