Mark Kamibaya

vwat? vwat is dis?

Oh, I think I know what it is.

No… maybe I should just wait until the internet connection isn’t so spotty. That shouldn’t affect it, but maybe it does. And I’m about to lose signal anyway…

@kate-flournoy This work?

Huh… that is weird. I’m having internet troubles, maybe that’s it?

@kate-flournoy Really? I can see it. This is a bit weird… Let me see if I can do it another way here.

Thanks everybody! Great comments.

@winter-rose @emma-flournoy I think the main problem with the font is definitely the color, though I think you might be right in saying the font could be better too.

So if you were to choose a different font, what would it look like?

@Daeus it’s not showing up…

@Daeus That is cool. Those buildings! I love them.

I think your name would look better the same sort of color as the title, but darker; and also what Hope said—the fonts do look a little mismatched.
Though actually…I think it’ll be great once you change the name color, without changing the font.
And the stuff about the rain too.

The title…[Read more]

@Daeus oohhh, I really like it. I would say yes, probably better to get your name matching the title. Also, a bit more technical piece of criticism here… my inner graphic designer is screaming at me that there should be more motion in the picture. It’s a lovely dramatic picture (love the shadows of the houses and such) but a lot more could be…[Read more]

@Jess that’s kind of neat.

@Ethryndal Will do. 🙂

I agree with getting your name the same color as the title. And I think the fonts should match better. Your name isn’t going to be fancy like the title, but they just seem mismatched right now. It would be cool if the pattern thing could be a symbol from the book, but I’m not sure if there are any overt symbols in your book…

And one picky…[Read more]

Any critique I have has already been mentioned. I like it. 🙂

@Ethryndal Certainly!

@jess Yes! I’ll be in prayer for his upcoming procedure.

Aha! It worked.

Ah, I didn’t think it would do that. Let me try this.

Ah, I didn’t think it would do that. Let me try this.

http://www.thescratchingquill.com/fairwin-option1/

Ah, I didn’t think it would do that. Let me try this.

Ah, I didn’t think it would do that. Let me try this.

Oh, by the way, the image isn’t the full resolution it will be and the clearish lines and stuff will be removed when the design is done.