Mark Kamibaya

@Alia I’ll be praying.

Very good.

@Emma-Flournoy the ‘a deep uncertainty’ is after an ‘and’ so it doesn’t really matter.

@Daeus It’s perfect. As long as web works grammatically with ‘a deep uncertainty’.

@Daeus yessss. We loves it very much. Except you made web plural. Typo.

Ok. Watcha think? @kate-flournoy @emma-flournoy

Matthew is sworn to avenge a murder. His dedication to his wronged family is powerful enough to bring him through any trial, but youth and inexperience hold him back. Setting out to find new strength, he plummets into a webs of tangled plots, tragedies, and a deep uncertainty surrounding his…[Read more]

Web! That works nicely, doesn’t it?

@Daeus @Kate-Flournoy

@Kate-Flournoy Oh, subtlety? Hmmm…

@Kate-Flournoy Oh, sublety? Hmmm…

@winter-rose Yeah, I do know what you mean. Hopefully I’ll have version two tomorrow.

Thanks @Daeus. ‘Preciate it. XD

Also my wifi will probably cut out before nine, so… may not actually get the results anyway. :/

@kate-flournoy I’ll tell you what words are! They’re letters that mean something. Go forth and conquer.

WELL SOME OTHER WORD FOR WAR-ZONE! XD Web. Net. Trap. Confusion. Desolation.

Because plummets is a singular action that does not match up with the plural of tangled plots.

@Emma-Flournoy

@Daeus I’m… writing? 😛 More like sitting staring at my screen asking myself ‘wut r words’ and dabbing my nose with tissues and trying not to sneeze everywhere because I have a cold… but it makes me happy that I’m trying… sort of… I’ll try a bit harder, I guess. Just don’t expect stunning results. XD

War-zone makes it sound like a WWII story.

@Daeus Myself is most sorry. *cringe* I didn’t remember who said to change it, but maybe that doesn’t work grammatically (why doesn’t ‘plummets into tangled plots work’ though?) …so do what yourself’s brain suggests. Critics aren’t for making you do what they want, after all, but for suggesting. 😛

@Emma-Flournoy *winces* Subtlety is a virtue, my dear. And if it isn’t it should be.

And I like the font as it is. That’s one of my favorite fonts. If popular vote demands I suggest another I shall do my best, but I really don’t think the font needs to be changed.

@Daeus you poor thing. @Emma-Flournoy we are sticklers for grammatical excellence around here. *glowers*

*sighs**rubs eyes* Okay. How about this. How about we play politicians here and work out a compromise. Is there some way you could make it grammatically correct to use both plummets and tangled plots? You’d need a transition of a few words—…[Read more]

@Daeus I wasn’t thinking the font should be changed, just really toned down in color; I had meant for the design under the title when I said something more angular.
I suppose it could work the same way to change the font to something more angular…in fact that might be better ’cause I like sub-title design.
Of those fonts you linked I think…[Read more]

@kate-flournoy @anyone-else. I’m gonna write for an hour, then possibly some more.