Mark Kamibaya

@winter-rose Congratulations!!!!! And what everyone else said. 😀 There is only so many ways to say it, I suppose, but great job.

@dragon-snapper @winter-rose @northerner @jess Happy New Year!

@ethryndal Amen! Happy New Year!

@dragon-snapped @winter-rose @northerner @jess Happy New Year!

@ethryndal Amen! Happy New Year!

@Northerner Haha, mine didn’t either. Except watch Tangled. I don’t know if that counts. 🙂

@Abigail-Blomberg Coolio! It’s a nice twist, doing it from Joseph’s perspective.

The main thing I think you might want to work on is the grammar in some places. Some where typos, some where just words together that didn’t quite make sense.

It isn’t perfect, but it is as perfect as I it can be for my sparrow.

This line had me a little confused a…[Read more]

Amen, @perfectfifths! Happy 2017! May it be a better year than any of it’s predecessors, may God help us to grow in faith and strength, may we ever seek Him more in the adventures He has planned for us, and may He bless our writing as we endeavor to honor His glory in the upcoming year.

@alia I’m so sorry. I’ll keep her family and all those involved in my prayers.

And yes. This is the correct way to post a critique thingy. 😉 For the forum, at least. If you wanted an excerpt critiqued by the actual staff and posted on the home page, you’d have to submit it by email as stated in the submission guidelines.

@Abigail-Blomberg I really love the idea of taking the story from Joseph’s perspective, and I love the symbolism of a songbird you chose to represent their love. Great choice. There were only a few things I noticed that actually needed work— for one, you seem to randomly switch back and forth between past tense and present tense. That can be…[Read more]

@Abigail-Rose I really love the idea of taking the story from Joseph’s perspective, and I love the symbolism of a songbird you chose to represent their love. Great choice. There were only a few things I noticed that actually needed work— for one, you seem to randomly switch back and forth between past tense and present tense. That can be…[Read more]

@AbigailRose I really love the idea of taking the story from Joseph’s perspective, and I love the symbolism of a songbird you chose to represent their love. Great choice. There were only a few things I noticed that actually needed work— for one, you seem to randomly switch back and forth between past tense and present tense. That can be…[Read more]

@Winter-Rose yessss. All that. The theme definitely wouldn’t have been as powerful, nor the characters as dynamic, if it hadn’t ended the way it did.

@Abigail-blomberg Wow! That’s a really awesome story!

@Abigailblomberg Wow! That’s a really awesome story!

@perfectfifths Happy New Year! (I am going to be so tired today for staying up till 12 and past) *yawn*

Ha! That’s awesome, @leumeister! So would James be from earth?

Okay… Well my lore starts off in the B.C.s, when Atlantis is supposed to have sunk. Except it didn’t sink. Actually, it starts of earlier than that…

The Atlanteans, having determined there was no way men could heal the immorality of the human race, decided to start anew… On a whole new planet! Now, even though this is in ancient, times,…[Read more]

Welcome back, @abigail-blomberg.

One of the best ways to navigate the forum is from the home page. At the very bottom, there is a list of the five most recently started topics. That’s the easiest way to tell if there’s a new thread. On the bottom of the sidebar on this site, we also have a “recent forum replies section.” That gives you the five…[Read more]

Yeah, @leumeister, give us the dig.