Mark Kamibaya

Congratulations, @dragon-snapper ! 🙂 I’m going to work for at least 30 minutes longer. You’re welcome to join me, Yankee. 😉 @northerner

@overcomer Huzzah! We have won! I finally found out which story I’m going to write next along with the theme course. Thanks for writing!

@Daeus those changes seriously helped it look more historical fictiony. It’s great.
I like the second one better, with the gleam on the words.
I think it might look better though if the gold was a little darker, whether you put it for the title or the subtitle, or with or without a gleam. It looks pretty similar to the silver.

Yay, @dragon-snapper ! Let us fight together! 😉

@overcomer I will be with you for unknown amount of time. Might have to leave in a few minutes, but I’ll see if I can be productive. 😛

I’ll be writing for 45 minutes if anyone wants to join. 🙂 @dragon-snapper , @daeus , @winter-rose , @anyoneatall

I’ll be writing for about an hour if anyone’s interested.

@Daeus Ah, okay.

@ethryndal So, Josiah will have the official answer on this, but I can’t see how it could possibly be any other way unless we deleted your account (which would be against our lifetime access policy)

@Dragon-Snapper XD
I have a quick question, @Daeus @Aratrea. Do people who enrolled in the beta-version not have access to the polished version once it’s, you know, been polished?

@daeus Yaaay!

@daeus Yaaay!

@dragon-snapper Ah, I get ya. Yep, that’s exactly what this course should teach you.

@ethryndal They signed the KP Awesomeness Paper this morning. 😛

@daeus Kinda…it was more like ‘if I want to have my book stand out as Christian then why haven’t I done that yet?’ I really only added a verse here and a verse there, a bible reference there and here. So, yeah, it did feel cheesy, though it wasn’t pushy. Too simple.

@daeus Kinda…it was more like if I want to have my book stand out as Christian then why haven’t I done that yet? I really only added a verse here and a verse there, a bible reference there and here. So, yeah, it did fell cheesy, though it wasn’t pushy. Too simple.

It’s official. Kingdom Pen is amazing. I’m going to sign up right now.

@dragon-snapper Let me just clarify: Are you saying that whenever you tried to share a message in your story, it either seemed too simple and therefore cheesy or too pushy and therefore cheesy? Or am I misunderstanding?

@zoe-wingfeather thanks for the info. 🙂 Looks like she does some pretty cool stuff.

@aratrea Exactly what you made it for, to write appealing Christian fiction that’s not ‘bored-to-tears’ type of reading. To learn how to incorporate theme into all my writing and that it would be moving. I’ll admit that I have had problems with the boring repetition for any audience. Either I was telling someone something they already knew, or I…[Read more]