@mark-kamibaya
Active 7 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@winter-rose Poor alpha reader. Alright. See you around.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@winter-rose Here. Have some lemonade. *hands you barrel*
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@winter-rose Hmm. Hopefully bittersweet, not just bitter?
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@winter-rose Yep.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
Oh, hey everybody. I’m beta reading now.
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Jackson Graham replied to the topic Dislocated shoulder question in the forum Fantasy 9 years, 7 months ago
Great question! I totally support keeping the narrative focused.
As for the scientific element, I don’t explicitly call it what it is, but the reader should definitely be able to tell. Also, the scientific things that I need to research affect the character’s being able to survive in my world. At this point, he would die if he…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Rachelle's Digital Art in the forum Art 9 years, 7 months ago
@Rachelle WOW. Her dress. How did you make it look like textured fabric??? Textures are the one thing I always struggled with. Good job. That’s… wow. Good job. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Rachelle's Digital Art in the forum Art 9 years, 7 months ago
@Rachelle WOW. Her dress. How did you make it look like textured fabric??? Textures are the one thing I always struggled with. Good job. That’s… wow. Good job. 😀
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Ethryndal posted an update 9 years, 7 months ago
@aratrea Just thought I’d let you know that I rather unexpectedly came down with the flu, and won’t be able to participate in the theme q and a today. Terribly sorry about this. -_-
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Rachelle's Digital Art in the forum Art 9 years, 7 months ago
@Rachelle That comics one is so adorable! I can’t see the other one very well because of the laptop monitor, but it looks good. And I can judge from the others’ reactions. 😛
You’re really good at this.@Ethryndal I’ll have you know, I care about folding dishcloths neatly. *severe glare*
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Rachelle's Digital Art in the forum Art 9 years, 7 months ago
@Rachelle That comics one is so adorable! I can’t see the other one very well because of the laptop monitor, but it looks good. And I can judge from the others’ reactions. 😛
You’re really good at this.@Ethryndal I’ll have you know, I care about folding dishcloths neatly. *severe glare*
I can’t stand messy folding, even for just kitchen towels. -
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Rachelle's Digital Art in the forum Art 9 years, 7 months ago
@Rachelle That comics one is so adorable! I can’t see the other one very well because of the laptop monitor, but it looks good. And I can judge from the others’ reactions. 😛
You’re really good at this.@Ethryndal I’ll have you know, I care about folding dishcloths neatly. *severe glare*
I can’t stand messy folding. -
Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Theme Mastery Q&A in the forum Theme Mastery 9 years, 7 months ago
Thanks for the questions @audrey-caylin and @hope! I’ll be sure to address them at today’s meeting.
Also, everyone should have gotten the link in your email, but just in case anyone missed it, the Q&A will be going live at kingdompen.org/theme-mastery-qa
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
@Winter-Rose Yeah, this is great.
And the moral to THAT is—don’t leave your iphones lying around!!
Just kidding. 😉Aaaand what some of the others said…still some punctuation and spelling errors and stuff; but you said you’ll be takin’ another look.
Nice job.
(*shakes head* That poor boy.)Also, something I’ve noticed not just with this…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@ClaireC Thanks. 🙂
Oh, and I meant I’d be praying too. My apologies, I see that could be taken more than one way. 😛
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Rachelle's "Hello" in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 7 months ago
@Ethryndal I SO feel you about the political discussion. Political discussion going on in the middle of anything else is bad for concentration. 😛
And I know. It’s wonderful.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Rachelle's "Hello" in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 7 months ago
@Ethryndal I SO feel you about the political discussion. Political discussion going on in the middle of anything else is bad for concentration. 😛
Oh I know. It’s wonderful.
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Snapper replied to the topic Punctuation Question in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@perfectfifths Well, I didn’t know either, so yeah…thanks google. 😛
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Punctuation Question in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@dragon-snapper Yeah, I kinda figured I was wrong 😛 Thanks for the clarification – this will be handy for all of us to know! 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic Punctuation Question in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
Ah. Well then. There you have it.
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Sorry to hear about that @ethryndal! Hope you get better soon!