@mark-kamibaya
Active 7 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@ethryndal Well, I’m done for now, though I wrote 924. How’d you do?
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Homework for Video 9: Theme & Story Structure in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 6 months ago
This is for my trilogy again. I’m only plotting the points of the disillusionment arc part of it this time because I’m not quite sure of all the details of how I’m matching the plot with the positive character arc yet. (Do you have a lesson about how to weave themes into a story that involve mental and emotional conflict more than physical…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@ethryndal Heh, heh. Third time’s a charm?
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper Well look at that, I can finally join you! 😀
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@daeus @kate-flournoy @winter-rose @ethryndal @jess @r-j-wordsmith @graciegirl @overcomer @northerner I’ll be writing for the next quarter hour here, if anyone would like to do the same.
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Snapper replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
“Get me that rat!”
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
Thanks so much guys! I haven’t abandoned you; my laptop went AWOL for a space there… XD
You glance down at the notebook in your lap only to find it covered in elegant, foreign symbols, and the pencil in your hand glowing with a faint blue light.
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Snapper replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@winter-rose Bolt! When Mittens was threatening him with the Styrofoam.
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Tips for Writing Short Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@clairec Oh, I have some competition, do I? 😛 Here ya go
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BlueJay posted an update 9 years, 6 months ago
@kate-flournoy, @emma-flournoy, @winter-rose, @perfectfifths, @sarah-h, @spradlin, @overcomer @everyone else.
Hi Keepers,
I thought I’d better touch base and let you all know that I’m still around but just not able to spend time on Kingdom pen. I’m ashamed to admit that I breached my parents’ trust and that’s going to take some time and effort to…[Read more] -
Daeus started the topic Ladies and Gentlemen! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
Yes, everyone, I have an announcement to make. You will pardon me if I copy and paste the email draft I threw together.
All KeePers beware! Opportunity ahead!
In just a few days, you’ll have a special chance to increase your writing knowledge and overcome whatever problem it is you’re struggling through at the moment. On Tuesday the 7th of thi…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Homework for Videos 6-8: Developing Character Arcs in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 6 months ago
@hope That looks great! I really like the expanded depth you have here with both five-step processes. They look good to me. 🙂
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic ARCHIVED – Homework for Video 11: Scene to Story Structure in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 6 months ago
@audrey-caylin Haha, nice work choosing ‘normal’ scenes. 😉 Just so I understand what’s going on in this other story, what’s the theme that’s being tackled?
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@kate-flournoy Of course not. Everyone knows we are more intelligent than minions. Aren’t we, fellow dragoness?
@daeus Er…sure…sir Daeuses. If that’s the case, maybe you should go read Villainy Made Easy: Chapter Six–Minions and Anger Management. -
Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Discussion for Video Eleven: Scene to Story Structure in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 6 months ago
Welcome back. 😉 I appreciate the spoilers. xD My spring break is coming up this next week and A Time to Die is at the top of my reading list for that week. Great work with those scenes. Sounds like a great way that Brandes initially forces the protagonist to choose a specific Experiment in Living, and then continues to test and push her in that…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Discussion for Video Eight: Flat Character Arc in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 6 months ago
@jenali That sounds like a great example. I love how many mothers are being mentioned in this thread!
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@dragon-snapper Daeuses take great care to specialize in their villainy.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper heyyyy… you insulting dragon brains?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@Daeus *nods* You show ’em.
XD
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@kate-flournoy @daeus *jaw drops* Daeus has minions?! Not fair! I only have my talons and a dragon-sized brain!
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And @rolena-hatfield too
@bluejay I was just thinking about you tonight, and wondering if you had gotten injured or sick. I’m so glad you are okay! 🙂 I’m sorry things aren’t going well. I will be praying for you, and for your family! We really miss you. :'( 🙂
Hey, @bluejay! Glad to see you again, though I’m sorry to hear what’s been going on! I was wondering where you went, especially since I made comments on that story you sent. If you’re still up for all that and want to get in contact with me, I have changed my email, so I’ll have to send it again 🙂
@bluejay, I’m so sorry this has happened for you. I have to say that I can fully empathize and understand where you’re coming from.Please know that I will not judge you, as I have also broken my parents trust on multiple occasions in the past. That was one of the reasons I started spending less time here. As you said, sometimes these things bring…[Read more]
@Bluejay!!! I’ve been thinking of you quite often and wondering what was up; and been praying for you, ’cause I’d no idea why I hadn’t heard from you in so long. I’ll certainly keep praying for you and your family, and I really hope all goes well.
Love you. *hugs*
@Kate-Flournoy Just making sure you saw this.
@bluejay ah, I wondered where you went. I’ll be praying, for sure. And yes, believe me— in the long run, this will strengthen your family. 🙂
@bluejay Miss you bunches and bunches, girl, but I’m glad you gave us this update and were so honest! That take a lot of courage. Praying for y’all and proud of you for making a hard (but ultimately, I’m sure, good) decision!
I miss you a lot already, @bluejay . 🙁 Don’t stay away too long! I’ll pray that you and your family will be able to work things out.