Mark Kamibaya

Hm… the whiny teenaged hero? 😛

@Aratrea

@winter-rose No, actually we’re both gone. Sorry about that.

I’ve actually only read one chapter of Milton, so…heh heh.

@kate-flournoy Oh, good it was only your laptop. I was worried you might have met an untimely midlife demise.

@Aratrea Well… Hmm. I wouldn’t say the lessons have been focusing on physical conflicts rather than mental conflicts. It’s just the matter of tying the theme to the conflict. Something like your example of fear and courage is pretty easy to show through conflict. You can show a character running and hiding at the beginning, then standing up and…[Read more]

And now I feel so terribly uncultured because I’ve never read Byron or Shelley or Milton… *sniff*

@Daeus @Northerner dah! Had to restart my laptop… it froze on me… *glum look* Sorry to keep you waiting. I got 623 words.

@northerner True. Well, I like Milton, so I’m good.

@northerner Excellent. Now I just have to be a romantic and my life will be meaningful.

@northerner @kate-flournoy 448. Not a lot, but I’m liking my story, so that’s what matters.

@northerner That’s just what’s so frightening. It did happen at eighteen.

@kate-flournoy Having your midlife crisis already? That’s another thing that happens at eighteen.

@Daeus *screams* I DON’T WANT TO TURN EIGHTEEN!

@kate-flournoy This is what happens to your brain when you turn eighteen.

@northerner EST

@Daeus… don’t you mean nine? :’D
I’m with ya.

@kate-flournoy @dragon-snapper @winter-rose @graciegirl @others I’ll be writing till eight.

@hope That looks fantastic! Great work.

@dragon-snapper That’s not from Ratatouille is it?

Yay, it worked.