@mark-kamibaya
Active 7 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic ARCHIVED – Homework for Video 11: Scene to Story Structure in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 6 months ago
@kate-flournoy Glad to hear we’ve been able to help you so much. Those kinds of comments make my day. 🙂
@hope Excellent. Very nice use of foil characters and perspective characters there to drive the scenes home.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Hi people! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 6 months ago
@graciegirl They’re very high-grade cardboard swords, actually. I’m quite proud of them. 😛
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Hi people! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 6 months ago
@Jason Oh, goodness, I’m neglecting my reputation!
I like poetry. I do. All of it. Especially the long, three page stuff that’s entirely in Elvish and no one understands. 😀
*cough cough* Ahem. Hey, so you’re an introverted extrovert! Or an extroverted introvert! Or whichever order that goes! (please, MBTI fanatics, I need you) And we have…[Read more]
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 6 months ago
@christi-eaton Would you mind having a try at one of my characters? Your drawing looked amazing and I’d love to see my own character in that style, if you want 🙂
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Christine Eaton replied to the topic Ellen [Short Story] in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 6 months ago
@Abigail-Blomberg FEELINGS! I actually really enjoyed reading this and it was so good I’ll forgive you for breaking my heart. 😀 Good job on this one.
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Christine Eaton replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 6 months ago
@perfectfifths Thank you, and aye, she does look a little like her. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Homework for Video 12: Foil Characters in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 6 months ago
@Aratrea I thought so too. 😉
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Homework for Video 12: Foil Characters in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 6 months ago
@kate-flournoy Nice. I like it. Relationships divided by politics like this can have tons of potential.
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Daeus replied to the topic Ellen [Short Story] in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 6 months ago
@Abigail-Blomberg This is truly excellent. Pretty much everything I ever point out to people when I’m editing you did right. There were like two little things I thought maybe you could improve that I’ve now forgotten, but they weren’t a big deal.
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 6 months ago
@christi-eaton That’s amazing! She kinda reminds me of Lindsey Stirling (thehip-hop violinist, if you don’t know 😉 ) with her poofy big hair and her interesting style 🙂
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Tips for Writing Short Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@daeus Okay, sounds good 😀 Thanks again for your help 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic Tips for Writing Short Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@perfectfifths Oh, it would take me a day normally, but I’ve got some other beta reading to do, so it might take a bit longer. I should have it done within a week though.
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Christine Eaton replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 6 months ago

See, I have the opposite problem as many here. I drew this pic a little while ago and it is still bothering me because I have no clue who she is. So if any of you have a character she fits (or want to make one up) go ahead because I need a name for her. 😀 Also, I’m loving looking at everyone’s art.
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Tips for Writing Short Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@daeus The 19th of April our time (that’s be the 18th for you), so about a month away, but I’d prefer if I could hear from you a couple weeks before that 🙂 How long do you think it will take?
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Daeus replied to the topic Tips for Writing Short Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@perfectfifths Btw, when’s the deadline? I want to make sure I get it back to you in time.
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Tips for Writing Short Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@daeus Yay! *is waiting in nervous anticipation*
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 6 months ago
@kate-flournoy That’s amazing!
@hope Argh! I finished the drawing, but my PC is being slow in loading something or opening something (I ain’t technical 😛 ) so I haven’t been able to stick it up 🙁 I’ll do it as soon as possible 🙂
In the mean time, I think I’ll post some characters of my own…
Trajan – son of a nobleman, so in the upper…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
Thanks, Jedi Writer @winter-rose ! 🙂 I couldn’t have taken the shields down and blown up the Death Star without you! I’m done too! Yay! 😀 I love it when the light wins. 😉 🙂
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Snapper replied to the topic Hello There in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 6 months ago
@widdrim My favorite era…probably the originals, with Luke and Leia, though I did enjoy the Force Awakens thoroughly. I asked if you liked Star Wars because every time I read “Hello There”, I see Obi-Wan Kenobi, dropping from the ceiling and into the midst of a gazillion clankers. Then there’s General Greivous, “General Kenobi.” 😛
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
Sweet, @winter-rose . You’re good! 🙂
I’m back for more writing! 🙂 Finishing up this short story will be my personal equivalent of blowing up the Death Star. For the Rebellion! 😉
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