Mark Kamibaya

@dekreel You are infinitely awesome. 😛

And I’m sure your work is fine. The main reason that Sector One jumped from awful to … well, that, is probably @daeus. Thanks Daeus. 😛

Guys, I’m just popping in here to say really fast that I honestly love you all. Reading though this made me so happy. Even though I’m not on here much, I can say that I love the community I see and get to serve 🙂 You guys are the bomb.

@dekreel That’s utterly hilarious! Thanks for tagging me or I would have missed it. I seriously need to get on here more.

@sam-kowal Good revisions. (And good synopsis in general, btw. These things are hard.)

Possibly, these three revisions could help.

Feastings end – feasting ends.

Only humans farm in the city of Kurr. Dwarfs would rather win glory in the exosuit arena. When food got low in the winter of 1276, the dwarves robbed us of our crops.

The dwarfs are…[Read more]

@Sam-Kowal perfect. 😀

@sam-kowal The idea is definitely intriguing.

As far as the synopsis goes, I agree with Kate that the voice is slightly inconsistent. My main advice though is cut anything you can. Like, “believe me, that tends to curb one’s appetite could be cut. There are a few words you cut elsewhere or phrases you could rephrase to sue less word.

Also, I…[Read more]

@Sam-Kowal ooh I really like it! Super cool concept. I think I’d definitely pick it up and read it.

On a more writerly note, the synopsis itself is well written, but it does seem a little choppy in places. It may simply be a case of too many fragments. Also, this is bugging me a little and it’s probably just me. But the voice is inconsistent……[Read more]

@JoiseBeth Welcome to KP! Mere Christianity is great. 😀

Holy cow, all of these memes are so perfect and I don’t even know where to begin. You all have seriously been making my week.

@dekreel Too true. And XD @michael-stanton ‘s

@jenwriter17 It is. Which is why this is the first side-angle drawing I’m quite happy with. 😉 😀

@jane-maree Ah, yes. Your screen must exceed the length of the image. I went ahead and tiled the parallax images.

@Daeus looks great. The only thing I noticed is a typo at the very end— in the money back section, you said ‘every’ when you meant ‘ever’. Other than that, it’s lovely. 🙂

@kate-flournoy

Possibly up your alley.

@joisebeth Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet!

*hands you cloak and dagger* You are now an official KeePer.

@devastate-lasting This is so cool! I love the concept– I wish I weren’t so internet paranoid though. XD

@jess-penrose That works!

@clairec Thanks!

This is a character a YDubber requested I draw (I asked for requests to help practise the style). It’s the first profile-angle drawing that I am really quite happy with, so I wanted to share it (with the character owner’s permission).