Mark Kamibaya

@Alia I want to try Hadassah Lin. 😀

@audrey-caylin Got it. Making that comparison clear to the readers can certainly be very effective even if the protagonist never sees it. Looks good overall!

@his-instrument Wow, that sounds neat. I’m afraid both the distance and the date won’t work for me, but tell us how it goes. Maybe we could start a branch in Columbus… I don’t know, you got me thinking.

@audrey-caylin So would you say the father will end up influencing the protagonist away from that POV, then, as she sees that the main reason he believes this is due to his mental disabilities?

@audrey-caylin Nice work. I like Tairock’s EiL and how that connects with the protagonist’s arc. With Tairock’s father, just to clarify, does he have a very similar view of truth because he’s mentally disabled and thus is erroneous in his view due to that disability, or does he have a similar view of truth because his mental disabilities help him…[Read more]

@jane-maree You seem to have a good grasp there on how these scenes are pushing him in his character arc. Those three scenes sound like they work together well then!

Oh yes… and I ought to have mentioned, but I have a free story that prequels Shadows of the Hersweald if anyone is interested. 😉 You can find it here.

@jane-maree Lol. Well, good. It’s supposed to be attractive.

@dragon-snapper Niceeee. He looks a little bit older and grimmer, but I like him. And his cloak! 😀 Thanks!

@dragon-snapper Your sister has great tastes. XD

@graciegirl Alright. I’m going to try Nykkai (unless someone has claimed her).

@hope And here is Dartagnah. Not sure if he is a likeness or not, but I loved the challenge.

@kate-flournoy Wow! She looks awesome!

@hope My sibling was jumping up and down when she heard that you had come out with a new book. 😛

@mark-kamibaya That’s good to hear.

@Mark-Kamibaya The Lord truly is amazing. I guess it’s things like this that we need to hold on to in hard times–all we can see is the pain, but God is working something beautiful out of it. I’ll be praying for your granduncle and aunt. 🙂

@dragon-snapper Yeah, anyone can be a foil character.

@aratrea As for Foil characters, can other main characters be foil characters? In my WIP, I don’t have too many characters at all.

@aratrea As for Foil characters, can other main characters be foil characters. In my WIP, I don’t have too many characters at all.

Sure. Here’s the links:

Edwin Brook: http://www.thescratchingquill.com/edwin-brook-redirection-page/

Treachery Against The House Of Fairwin: http://www.thescratchingquill.com/treachery-against-the-house-of-fairwin-free-book-2/