Mark Kamibaya

@delightinlife Yes. https://www.16personalities.com

@daeus Hmmm…the only ENFJs I know are you and myself…
@delightinlife Yay! Yes, that ‘cliche’ I think is so funny, because although true, and although I’ve used it myself, it may well have been used by every author out there. 😛
@jenali 😀 Thanks so much!

@ethryndal Mayhap. 😉 Btw, does anyone know of any really good ENFJ villains? I’ve been wanting to find a great ENFJ villain. (@kate-flournouy?)

What’s the next quote?

@Daeus You need to write a villain handbook.

@Dragon-Snapper it doesn’t really matter when you have beta-readers actually. I think it is pretty standard procedure to wait until you’re ‘done’, but in my case the story was so ridiculously long I’ve been sending it out in sections to the first round, hammering the second draft into shape as I go. Once I finish up with that I’ll run through it…[Read more]

@daeus *jots notes quickly into notebook* I see…another great lesson from King Daeus.
You accidentally controlled the people. *claps* More ice cream for all.

@kina-lamb Ha! I tricked you. I really do like to control people, I just don’t like them to feel like I’m controlling them and I don’t like to feel like I’m controlling them myself. Nasty feeling controlling people. You want to control them accidentally.

@perfectfifths … … …
I can only think of one person on KP who has an instrument as their profile picture… *glances at you* Would you like to be the bard/minstrel?

@dragon-snapper @daeus I share your love of music and how amazing it is! Since King Daeus loves music so much, will he have a personal bard?

@dragon-snapper I haven’t read what everyone else has said, so feel free to disregard if I’m repeating other people or you already have all the advice you need, but… *hands you five cents* (we don’t have pennies here 😛 ) Keep the change 😉

Perhaps you could keep the POV in the SACK’s and we’re seeing the story about the MC from the SACK’s POV.…[Read more]

@kate-flournoy Back to the two cents.
Thanks for all the advice! I see that I’m going to have to learn more about the main character…that sounds strange, seeing as I invented the MC. 😛
Una pregunta: for beta-readers, do people have beta-readers while they’re writing, after they’ve finished writing, or does it vary? (I assume there isn’t a…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper It had gotten marked as spam. That’s the reason if a post doesn’t show up. I think it was the constant repetition of SACK and maybe some of the phraseology. It’s hard to know for sure.

@dragon-snapper Funny, I’m just facing this for the first time. I’ve got these two main characters, a brother and sister, and the brother (who is the protagonist) is of a moderate disposition whereas the sister is snarky, adventurous, and insanely awesome #ilovehertodeath.

I think one thing that’s helped me is separating them a lot. That way the…[Read more]

@kate-flournoy Never mind. It just decided to show up. 😛

@kate-flournoy *takes to cents* Before, I get back to you on the two cents, are you able to see the post that I made to create this topic? I can’t see it anywhere…

@Dragon-Snapper welllll… generally I’d say if you’re connecting with one character better than the other and giving them more screen time etc., switch MCs because you’ve probably got them mixed up, but it looks like you already tried that.
So… the problem may not be your attachment to SACK, but your lack of attachment to the quiet one.…[Read more]