@mark-kamibaya
Active 7 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Snapper replied to the topic Hear Ye, Hear Ye!! *excited peasants step forth* 😛 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@r-j-wordsmith I don’t even know how to begin to say that…it probably have more ‘i’s than Mississippi does. 😛
Rampike: a dead tree, especially the bleached skeleton or splintered trunk of a tree killed by fire, lightning, or wind. (definition from dictionary.com)
This word made me think of the article (this) that @hope wrote a week or so ago…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@daeus @jenali @spradlin I think that we are outnumbered by introverts. Probably a good thing…less cooks in the kitchen make a better concoction.
@that_writer_girl_99 I’m working on it. I haven’t written much in the past few days, but I have it all planned out.
@christi-eaton Aha! Another extrovert!Okay, if Daeus is the dictator, and…[Read more]
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Christine Eaton replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 9 years, 5 months ago
Alright @mark-kamibaya, you want a movie review/opinionated rant. Your wish is granted.
Three words: La La Land. *Struggles with putting all the feelings into words for this post*
Okay, guys, I’m serious though. I think it is official that La La Land is my favorite movie. (And I’m the type of person who doesn’t have a favorite movie.) Last…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@jess @winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 @dragon-snapper @ethryndal @graciegirl I’ll be writing for an hour if anyone’s interested.
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Rolena Hatfield replied to the topic *stands up to introduce self* *trips* in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 5 months ago
@feedingmygoldfish I am fashionably late! But welcome to the kingdom! So glad Brianna convinced you to join us here! Any friend of her’s is a friend of mine… especially a fellow squirrel lover. 😀
Which is your favorite color? A black, red or gray squirrel? Have you written a book about squirrels? -
Daeus replied to the topic Please critique! Three poems here. in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Do you mean age nine? If so, I’m really impressed.
Not that they’re Byron or anything, but for a nine year old, they’re quite good.
I feel really bad, but for once I can’t really pinpoint what needs to be improved with these poems. I know there’s some tone, methodology, or approach about them that’s all the same but I don’t know what…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Theme Mastery Q&A #2 in the forum Theme Mastery 9 years, 5 months ago
@aratrea I’ll try to make it.
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Daeus replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 5 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Ok, here’s my edits.
Prologue:
A tree loomed up ahead.
This is a drag on the pacing. Remove or see if you can incorporate into the next sentence.
The girl covered her ginger hair
You already said her hair was ginger. No need to repeat.
The corners of Halle’s mouth turned upwards
Replace ‘Halle’s’ with ‘her’.
She wasn’t far fro…
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Theme Mastery Q&A #2 in the forum Theme Mastery 9 years, 5 months ago
Hey all,
Just a reminder that this is happening today from 3-4 PM EST. To access the Q&A, go to https://kingdompen.org/theme-mastery-qa/ Looking forward to interacting with you there!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 5 months ago
@I-J-Anderson hey it’s totally not a problem. Life happens. I’m sure all of us understand. 😉
Besides, it’s good to let a topic rest sometimes. Otherwise people get burned out and start hating it.THE THREE LITTLE PIGS IN SHAKESPEAREAN LANGUAGE?! *delighted scream* THAT SOUNDS AWESOME! :”D Tell me how it goes. I’m sure you’ll do great.
And……[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic *stands up to introduce self* *trips* in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 5 months ago
@Ethryndal *shakes finger reprovingly* Pay attention to your own advice my dear. XD
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Ethryndal replied to the topic *stands up to introduce self* *trips* in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 5 months ago
@theliterarycrusader Do you have this uncanny knack at sounding totally convincing about something you haven’t the slightest clue about? XD
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Ethryndal replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
Step #1: Look at people from the corner of your eyes and say something creepy. This will scare them out of their wits.
Step #2: Turn your head so you’re meeting their gaze full on and slowly pull your mouth into a smile. An evil cackle is optional.
Step #3: At this point, they will be so terrified of you they will just flee.
My…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic *stands up to introduce self* *trips* in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 5 months ago
@Emma-Flournoy I missed the first sentence and thought you said you were an INFJ. I was like, wait, but you told me— XD Take heed, kids; This is why we don’t speed read.
@theliterarycrusader Oh great, I can’t get away from them. XD I’m officially scared of Josiah too.
@feedingmygoldfish Yeah, most people tell Anna she’s the sweetest thing,…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper I think you need to somehow get these fanatics’ MBTI obsession into your next story…
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Daeus changed their profile picture 9 years, 5 months ago
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Ethryndal replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 You have come to the right internet space for that. *signs you up*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@GracieGirl that’s totally fine. 😉 I can be patient. *cough*I’ll make myself be*cough**cough*
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Christine Eaton replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
*ESTJ comes running in ready to take charge if this apocalypse and rebellion should flare up further.* Also @daeus, I’m totally game for you to be the dictator, can I be your Press Secretary? I have plenty of experience actually. *smirks at memories from when I worked in the Oval Office* good times.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
*poof*
What’re ya talkin’ about? Nothin’ just happened. *Jedi mind tricks you* No, nothing odd just happened.
*walks off whistling carelessly*
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