@mark-kamibaya
Active 7 years, 6 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Snapper replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@dekreel XD Epic. I love the perfect fifths thing. 😛
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Snapper replied to the topic Just a Bit… Dismal in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Oookay, that’s a lot to catch up on. XD
@introvert_girl Right. The emotions in my character should be strengthening them… I’ll try to keep that in mind…
@ethryndal This is for the third book in the trilogy, so I can understand why you’re not seeing it. I think one of the problems might be that I’m focusing too much on characters and not…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 8 years, 2 months ago
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Snapper replied to the topic Out of season NaNoWriMo update in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@hannah-c XD That’s hilarious though. (And thanks, but I have plenty to write about. 😛 )
I’m writing a science fiction trilogy right now. Working on the last book, then to editing. *headdesk* And thank you. 🙂
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Snapper replied to the topic Question in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@hannah-c YES! It sound hilarious, actually. 😛
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Snapper replied to the topic A Year Ago… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Woooohoooo! KP-versary (almost) Congratulations! 😀
I’m so glad you’ve been on here, Elizabeth! You’re cheery, fun and so helpful. I look forward to the coming years! 🙂
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Snapper replied to the topic Why do you write? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@pickupyourpenandwrite How funny! I just posted about this this morning on my blog. XD
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@Dekreel This is great. XD And I agree with @ClaireC, the small installments are nice; makes it easier to read and in one sitting. 😉
@PerfectFifths If you really could cut in perfect fifths that would be quite a feat.
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@ariella-newheart Accurate.
@dekreel Ok; not going to lie, that last pic of me kind of creeps me out…
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Daeus replied to the topic Just a Bit… Dismal in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@dragon-snapper If the problem is just that your story seems too dismal, make sure there’s always an element of hope mixed in with the chaos and strive to focus on your characters’ yearnings/ambitions that drive them forward. If you’ve got that all down, I bout your story could be too dismal. Problems tend to intensify stories. It’s only stories…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 8 years, 2 months ago
@dragon-snapper 😀
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Just a Bit… Dismal in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper Is this problem arising in the current story you’re working on, or all of them as a whole? Because child, I’m almost finished reading your book, and I honestly don’t know what you’re talking about. If anything, I was going to say that you need to focus more on the emotion, not less. Is this a response from beta-reader feedback, or…[Read more]
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Snapper started the topic Just a Bit… Dismal in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Alrighty, guys…
I could use some help on this front. I’ve learned pretty well over the past few months how to show and not tell, but I actually am using that too much.
Don’t get me wrong. Always show over tell, but my problem is that I’m focusing way too much on the emotion. And Ike… Zelaya, they’ve all gone dismal.
How do I refocus my…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Out of season NaNoWriMo update in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@hannah-c HANNAAAAHH! Hi and welcome back!
Ooh, yikes, I’m so glad you’re okay. 🙂
Comical autobiography… that sounds hilarious. 😛 Is it about you?
Up to?
Up to much mischief, my dear friend…
I finished my third novel, working on the fourth now. Also started a blog, the link of which you can find down there in ze signature.
I also…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 8 years, 2 months ago
@sam-kowal *cracks knuckles* @daeus I had to tag you too. XD
Challenge accepted. Raspberries. Go.
Frozen Raspberry
Bland,
And the gray of night,
Shivering hands.
No light.
I couldn’t fight,
Tasteless.
I couldn’t write…
Numbness.
Why?
A question…
A question for the sky.
Of this evil infection?
Why the gray,
Does…[Read more]
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine Oh, yeah. 😛
I didn’t think so, which is why I stopped at four verses. But now I want to try – it just may take longer.
Hole, thread, cut, sharpen, stone, water, well… Oh, I know, it gets too late to go to the well, so you have to sleep. With what shall I sleep with? With a blanket! There’s a hole in my blanket! XD
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine One thing about sewing… the thread can never be too long (okay, maybe it can, but better too long than too short). But yes, it is a pun, and I didn’t realise it until you said so. XD I was just making my own version of the song “There’s a Hole in My Bucket.”
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 8 years, 2 months ago
A Hole in My Blanket:
There’s a hole in my blanket,
Dear Rochell, dear Rochell
There’s a hole in my blanket,
Dear Rochell, a holeWell mend it, dear Louise
Dear Louise, dear Louise
Mend it, dear Louise
Dear Louise, mend itWith what shall I mend it,
Dear Rochel, dear Rochel,
With what shall I mend it,
Dear Rochel, with what?With…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine Haha; I was worried for a moment that I should have recognized your name on here long ago. xD No; you’re fine. I remember who you are now, and I remember enjoying talking to you since there weren’t a bunch of people who stopped by the booth for extended periods of time at CHAP. Glad to know you ended up making it over to the forum. 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine I’ll play it by ear. I like writing poetry, but I might be swamped this week.
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