@mark-kamibaya
Active 7 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Dragons like to eat fried chicken. Dragons like to eat ice cream. Dragons love to have fried chicken and ice cream in the same day.
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Snapper replied to the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@winter-rose Yep. Still taking as much criticism as I can get. 😛
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@daeus Hello!
@winter-rose I am editing my novel, and might move on to edit my contest story, then I shall brainstorm. -
Daeus replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@winter-rose @dragon-snapper I’ll join you.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@winter-rose 😀 Surprise!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@winter-rose 😀 Surprise!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@winter-rose I think we posted at the same time… 😛
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
I am editing for a while if anyone is out there. @daeus @audrey-caylin @winter-rose @ethryndal @jess @kate-flournoy @jane-maree @graciegirl @jenali
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Alia Poor guardian angel. 😛
Yes, I’ll be praying. -
Daeus replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@alia Ooh. Ok. Certainly.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 that is a GREAT midpoint. So right now what you’re looking for seems to be a first plot point— where Kara commits to action. What about Blake? Was he taken in the fight with the Catastrophes? Or did he use it as a distraction to infiltrate the prison and get caught or something? If that’s the case Matthias could have gotten…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Ren in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@His-instrument YES THE TRAILER. OH HELP. HOW CAN I WAIT UNTIL DECEMBER? Also, I think there’s a topic about Rogue One somewhere. *digs it up* Oh yes, here it is. https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/rogue-one/ I’m pretty sure it’s mostly @Emma-Flournoy and I ranting though… XD
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Ren in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@his-instrument I’ve seen the trailer. It looks pretty epic 😀 By the way, Louise Fowler is me, so if you tag perfectfifths, you tag Louise Fowler 🙂
And as an aside, I haven’t seen Rogue One, so if you’re all going to talk about it, please don’t tag me 😉 -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 perhaps you should try mapping out Kara’s arc in detail and going from there?
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Love Triangles— what the Classical Authors knew that we don't. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Ethryndal I know. My impeccable memory and attention to detail must have failed me then. *hangs head in shame*
I was so happy to be proven incorrect though. XD
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@Daeus Oh, I knew she drew it, I just saw it colored in your version. Cool. Effects.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic The Wonderland Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien I second everything @adry_grace has said. (How come these people are so good at voicing my exact opinion?) I love the ending. LOVE. And the present tense is good too. 🙂
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Wonderland Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien I really like the present tense in this. *waits for random answer*
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@winter-rose Signing off. Got one chapter edited and some grammatical stuff fixed. Thanks for writing. 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@winter-rose Great.
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