Mark Kamibaya

@Dragon-Snapper The grammar fairies are having heart attacks.

@That_Writer_girl_99 Cool! Thanks!

Guys! Look, I made a thing. This is not my protagonist, but she’s another (very cool) personage that I’m having fun with. (*cough cough* Can you say antagonist?)

@Emma-Flournoy This is the one who’s character page you were snooping on. 😉

aislinn-mollisong *headdesks with you* Tell me about it.
You know that you’re a writer when you realize that I’ve been saying ‘your’ instead of ‘you’re this whole time and feel terrible.

@catwing Oooo….she’s saying it. Which makes it even more awesome!

The story sounds solid from what you’re telling me. *thumbs up*

I do, however, wonder about the story world. It’s not that I think it’s wrong to do what you’re doing, but I wonder if it’s right. A force that leaks through cracks int he universe sounds mystical and there doesn’t appear to be a God in your story. I certainly believe that fantasy…[Read more]

@aislinn-mollisong It’s actually been done before. The Eragon series was done by a homeschooled teen of 15.

*pokes head in momentarily*
Hey…the topic is getting pretty long, and it freaks out whenever I try to click on it…so someone might want to make a new one…
*disappears*

*silently creeps in and listens because she wants to be published too but is younger than most peoples as well*
*bookmarks page*

@xonos-darkgrate I’m pretty sure most publishers will technically except writers of any age, though you may have to get a cosigner if you’re under 18 or something like that. I don’t know. I certainly know that some publishers do accept younger writers. Now, if they know that you’re younger, you will probably have a harder time convincing them to…[Read more]

@shannon Yay! *fistpump* I love her too. 😀
@jessi-rae Indeed. *ponders thoughtfully* Very intriguing. 😛
@mariposa ikr? 😀 She absolutely loves color and flowers and everything pretty.
@ingridrd Thanks!
@that_writer_Girl_99 Excellent question…I’ll have to consider giving it a significance. You’ve got my gears turning now. 😀

And this one is for the sequel to Sector One: Insurrection.
Her name is Dyemon.
And she’s awesome.

@catwing To be honest, I want to read it too. *sigh* Now I have to finish writing this trilogy to get there….
Little details: There’s a hat, a jet and a party.
Eventually, it will have beta-readers. Eventually…

@catwing Good job with the improvements. 😀

I also liked @perfectfifths‘ improvements. I’ll go off those and add some adjustments myself.

Alex is not normal. She and her friends talk with animals. (No need to say they understand animals. That’s assumed if they talk with them.)

Then she and her friends meet a mysterious cloaked messenger, who…

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@seekjustice @jess-penrose @jane-maree *feels really pleased my suggestions were so helpful* 😉 😛

@catwing Ultimately it’s up to you to decide. And based on all the versions I’ve read, each one giving a little more about the story than before, yet still keeping it a mystery, I’d love to read this book as well. 😀

@catwing I think I like the second one better, but with a few tweaks (all suggestions of course 😉 ).

Alex is not normal. She talks with her wolves. And understands them.
Then she and her friends meet a mysterious cloaked messenger, who gives them a riddle from a long dead tyrant. They must save Allore by finding three jewels, and giving them to…[Read more]

@mariposa So glad you asked! 😀
It’s a Utopian Science Fiction, the setting is Earth in the 22nd century.

@emily

How do you make it have that bar thing before something that you copy from another section?

Select the text and click the B-QUOTE button.

You guys these are so awesome!!! Great job all!
*steeples fingers* And now thou have all inspired me to make another.
I give you a collage for a new book which will be a standalone that I probably won’t get to until next year (AAAAHHHH WHY? GRR!) Anyway, yes. I absolutely cannot wait to write it and I think it’ll probably be my most thematically…[Read more]

@Aislinn-Mollisong got it. 🙂 You did mention that you weren’t going to use that in the final, but I wanted to make sure. They’re fine to use for fun, but if you’re going to use them commercially in any way… yep. Copyrights. 😉

Awesome! Show it to me when you’re done.

@Aislinn-mollisong it looks great, but I’ve seen that image floating around and I’m pretty sure it’s not free; did you find the artist and ask for copyright license?

But as far as composition and layout, it looks great. The only thing is you might want to consider a slightly bolder, straighter font. Something more in tune with the fantasy mood.