@mark-kamibaya
Active 7 years, 8 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Three and Seven ~ Finding Secrets in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 8 months ago
@catwing Yeah, I’m interested, but it depends if you have a specific time you want it done by, or just anytime. 🙂
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@Winter-rose *bows*
This character’s name is Ace. But he’s too extensive for me to say anything else about him. Just that he is absolutely amazing! And deep! Haha!
But I have to wait till next year to write him. *groans* Trilogies.
And I have to go now…bye!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@winter-rose Break! Aha! My sibling is on break too, so it’s nice to see him. 😀 And you. I’ve missed you around here. 🙂
I’m good, actually, really good. For writing, I’m almost halfway through my next novel, and for life, I survived the PSAT.
Right now, I’m working on characterizing the most interesting character I’ve ever had the honor to…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@jessi-rae Aw, I’m sorry. I hope you feel better!
@winter-rose Frodo! 😀 *enwraps you in dragon hug* Hi!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@xonos-darkgrate @allison-grace @winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 @catwing @epicaddie2 I’ll be here for a bit characterizing.
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Snapper replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 8 months ago
Another one by Snapper? What?
Well, I couldn’t resist. You all are a bad influence on someone who should be writing instead of spending an hour on these things.
This one is for the last book of the trilogy, the problem child, but I finally found a plot for it!!!!
So here it is.
@ingridrd @jessi-rae @winter-rose @daughteroftheking @kate-flou…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
@daeus Well…you said that you were going to write it as if it were his diary. I think it would be just as fine without. It’s seems as if the dates are extra. Write it in first person, but not as if he’s writing in his diary. … Also, I didn’t think that you’d go through different parts of his diary when I wrote that…and I also forgot that…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 That’s what I’m confused about. This story is written in first person. You must be suggesting a different style within the boundaries of first person.
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Daeus replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
@perfectfifths Thanks 🙂
@dragon-snapper @that_writer_girl_99 I’m not sure I know what you mean. How would writing it from his POV be different? I thought I would write it diary style because he will only get to re-enter into the story on certain days.
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Snapper replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 8 months ago

This one is for Tallore too, but it defines him a bit more. @mariposa @shannon @emily @kate-flournoy @catwing @ingridrd @daughteroftheking @jessi-rae
And don’t forget that’s he’s Dyemon’s brother.
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Snapper replied to the topic The Problem Child in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
@catwing Man with a gun…mysterious catwing with a gun. That would be creepy. 😛
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Snapper replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
@daeus Hey! That is a pretty neat concept! I love how he gets to be the heroes neighbor. That’s awesome.
I agree with @perfectfifths that you should continue this, however, I think it’d be better if you didn’t write it from the perspective of his diary, and instead just his POV, first person.
But that’s it really. Otherwise I love it!
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
@daeus Wow! That’s really cool! And a really interesting concept of how a minor background character only exists when the hero is interacting with him.
I’m officially intrigued. You should definitely continue this. 😀
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Daeus started the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
Dear KeePers,
Two days ago, I was inspired to write a short story that at the time seemed like a brilliant idea. I wanted to write the diary of a character from a novel who struggles with his identity and the problem of evil.
The problem was, as I wrote the first entry last night, I felt like what was coming out was practically worthless. Having…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic The Last Jedi in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@his-instrument Porgs are definitely Snoke’s secret minions… 😉
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Snapper posted an update 8 years, 8 months ago
Why is it that all of the famous authors have to have a J starting their first name? J.R.R. Tolkien, John Flanagan, J.K. Rowling, Jennifer A. Nielsen…
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Snapper replied to the topic The Problem Child in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
*double facepalm* And I used the wrong form of ‘your’. My apologies, grammar fairies.
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Snapper replied to the topic The Problem Child in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
Why do I always forget about my own topics? *facepalm*
So first off @daeus You’re point about the lessons to be learned does open up a lot. I planned the second book by plotting out the theme first…I guess I should do that again, just for a national scale. And indeed it works very well. And usually, I would plot it out from beginning to end, I…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 8 months ago
@Ethryndal OH that makes sense too…yeah. Whenever I see fancy dresses in non-fantasy looking collages, I automatically think steam-punk because where else would dresses be worn? 😛 But no, that fits too.
Come to think of it, she’s only that evil 60% of the time.
I’m glad to hear it. 😂
She sounds seriously intriguing though.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 8 months ago
@Emma-Flournoy Actually… no, no it’s not. More like fairytale. She’s a stepsister. (Whether it gave that impression or not… I kinda forgot about creating a proper atmosphere.)
Come to think of it, she’s only that evil 60% of the time. I suppose the collage caught her at a bad moment.
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Add James Riley to that list. (Not famous. I don’t think. But really good.) XD That’s funny.