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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic My Sister Published a Book in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@theshadow @grcr @ellette-giselle @stephie
My sister, Ellie, just published the sequel to A Prached Land. She would appreciate it if you would check it out!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic My Sister Published a Book in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@theshadow @stephie @grcr @ellette-giselle
My sister, Ellie, has published the sequel to A Parched Land. You can now order it on Amazon. She would appreciate it if you would take a look!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
You’re welcome!
(Odd how it’s so clear in your mind and then someone tells you what they though you said and it’s not at all what you meant. I find this in writing and in speaking.)
Yup. Another reason for proofreading.
If you have another book later on that doesn’t have Christian rebellion as a major component, I will be hap…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
You’re welcome!
For Alec’s arc, I was expecting him to do something in the climax that would impact either Sara or Cole. Prehapes both of them. Something like helping Sara, telling Witlock that he can’t work there anymore, helping Cole ‘protect’ Sara, or even standing up to Cole and trying to stop him.
I think chapter 55 wouldn’t…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
I have added my feedback to your file!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Don’t worry, I didn’t think you were frustrated. But yeah, we can discuss it for fun if you want, even if just to help you figure out why you believe what you believe. Probably on a separate forum from here, though.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic I'm not an International Lawyer: Help in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
doesn’t make any sense.
Essentially, I’m saying I don’t believe it is right not to help the Jews, but I don’t believe it would be right to do those things to protect them either. So I can trust in God to provide a way of escape where I don’t have to do any of those things to protect the Jews.
Does that make sense?
But yeah, I can s…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
All right. I won’t push it any further on my end, as I don’t want to turn this into a point of division. But yeah, I probably won’t read your second book, as I would be too distracted by this issue. Thank you for understanding and respecting my position.
As an aside, it might be interesting if you added a character like me to…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
With all that said, I still am trying to figure out all that I believe and why I believe it on these issues. This is also why I want to hear what you have to say for your side, to see if I should maybe reconsider my side, as I am doing with passifism. And maybe in exchange, I can give you a few things to think about…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
As for the church leaving… they did. They left the city, but there is no place to run to, and while they did go underground, there is still the fact that 1. the will be discovered, it’s only a matter of time, and 2. evil is running rampant and unchecked.
Okay, that makes sense.
Read the Crown and Covenant Tri…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
I feel like I’m bad at explaining this…. is it making sense? Or am I just making the world more confusing at the moment….. XD
I think I get what you are saying. Christians should rebel and take on the government if it is the only means to protect their families. That was also an argument in your friend’s essay on violence: Fathe…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Very sorry for not replying soon. Work picked up again, and I’ve been wasting the free time I have.
Wow!! That was fast!
Heh heh. I had a lot of free time to read during long drives.
I think we both have different beliefs on this in general, but if there are some things you want to talk about, then I’m willing to listen. I t…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Great KP Search in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 1 month ago
Okay. Maybe I will wait a bit and give you some more time to get through to them.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Rock music in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 2 months ago
Instead of giving you a direct answer, I am going to give you a few things to think through from both sides of the argument.
I don’t believe that just because something has been invented by a Godless person does not mean it is wrong. Consider this: If we take a look at the book of Genesis, it was Jubal who invented instruments.…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Well, I’m back from vacation and I have finished your book!
Sorry for the lack of comments. Often, while I was reading it, I didn’t even have Wi-fi or Data, so most of my feedback will be my answers to your questions I found on page 15 of this forum.
Overall, it was an exciting story with interesting characters. I can see why…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Great KP Search in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 2 months ago
@whalekeepe @hybridlore @keilah-h @esther-c
I would stay away from things like WIX. I can’t remember what it was, but while they are easier to make, there were reasons my instructors gave me to avoid these. Security might have been one of them. (Then again, Kingdom Pen isn’t. Because of my knowledge of WordPress, I was able to find an admin login…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
You’re welcome!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago

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