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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
Oi, if you want to put up with Nine and Rose, that’s fine with me, you can have both of them. @hope
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
The “Impossible Girl” will probably have a different take on which Doctor to start with than I… @gracie-girl
@f5a8c3e92 Are you a fan of Twelve?
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
*coughs* @hope See the explanation above.
Ten is great, don’t get me wrong. I don’t actually like Nine, but maybe that’s just me…
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
I don’t know. I blame Moffat… @hope
@gracie-girl Yep, Hope is definitely right. That’s why i suggested the Eleventh Doctor first. Nine and Ten can be cheesy, but Eleven is easier to bond with as a character.
I started off with Eleven, and by the time I got the the Doctor’s earlier incarnations, I was so in love with the show that I didn’t…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
Um. It is. Definitely.
Fair warning, though, the seasons don’t run as a typical TV shows’ seasons do, they’re sectioned based on the actor playing the Doctor at the time.
I’d start with the Eleventh Doctor, Matt Smith’s version. He (technically) has 3 seasons: Season 5, Season 6, Season 7A, and Season 7B.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
Me too! I prefer Doctor Who, but Sherlock is just SO. GOOD. @hope @f5a8c3e92 @gracie-girl
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
There’s nothing wrong with bein a feeler @hope
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
Wow. @daeus
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
Did you just…quote what I think you quoted? @f5a8c3e92
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92 Do not underestimate the power of the INFP…
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92 I didn’t see that you’d tagged me in this until just now, sorry!
All in all, I really like this excerpt. Generally, it ready pretty well, and flows pretty smoothly, but there are a couple of grammatical issues, although I’m sure someone better at this than I has already pointed them out.
In the prologue, the pacing is a little slow,…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92 Not if the INFPs have anything to say about it… *grins*
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
I COMPLETELY agree with that. More than I can say. Ugh. @kate-flournoy @f5a8c3e92
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
Understanding sarcasm will always be a weakness of mine…I’m always too busy thinking about something else, lol. @kate-flournoy Thanks for the heads-up.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
I…knew that. Yep. @kate-flournoy Rookie mistake. To be honest, I think I was too busy trying to come up with a witty retort to fully comprehend…
*coughs* Not like I zone out like that in real life. Ever. Yep.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
I…knew that. Yep. @kate-flournoy Rookie mistake.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
That…whatever you just said went wayyy over my head, sorry… @daeus *rolls eyes*
@kate-flournoy Oh, if I was going to be scared away, I would have done so a long time before I started my introductory forum…
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
Knowing what I know now, @kate-flournoy I’m surprised you didn’t ask me what type I am when I first joined KP…
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
I’m late to this convo (again) but YES! INFP’s represent!
@daeus Dangit, now I want ice cream…
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
I’m late to this convo (again) but YES! INFP’s represent!
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