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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
I appreciate the thoughts! I hadn’t thought much about items before – although specific things come to mind. My goal is to make this character less of a person to mourn for, and more of a person to enjoy reading about. *Bows and offers you a jar of glitter to poof yourself back home if needed*
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Hey guys, I’ve been thinking. How do you encourage a reader to like a character who is already dead? And with minimal flashbacks? And and without being boringly sad? I have a few ideas, but this has been a challenge so far and I was wondering what everyone else thinks.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Alright, here is my feedback!
~ Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?
You know Tyn and Cyrus were my favorites from the previous book. In this book, I enjoyed James and Eric (post-memory wipe), both for their enthusiasm. Iskyagus was fun as well for the brief moment he was there.
~ Were there any c…
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Be careful out there, fellow writers 👀😂
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year ago
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year ago
AAHH GUYS
Look. I would watch them anyway to make my guy friend smile, so it’s a win-win for everybody. *Holds out hand to shake on it* I’ll watch em
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year ago
I still haven’t watched Alan Becker, but one of my best friends has always been obsessed and I should watch them for the sake of making him happy. XD I have no doubt they’re good.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year ago
Aaahh the Link drawing! 🤣🤣
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
I am very much behind, but reading the rest of it all at once will give me an idea of your pacing, too. Will get to it soon and will give feedback!
The question you accused of being AI generated may be the only one on there that is not.
Bruuuhhh
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
I immediately thought of Marlo and Oakley. :]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year ago
Sometimes I find a huge piece of paper and doodle on it with my siblings. This time I doodled a frog without really looking, and it came out like this.

It’s an absolute monstrosity and now I don’t trust myself to doodle without paying attention
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year ago
I’ve tried using that designer too. Never got to the same level of detail as Keilah’s characters here. 🙂
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Esther posted an update 1 year ago
@savannah_grace2009
Hey Sara!
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Loopy replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
I am definitely behind already lol. There were some unexpected social plans that messed up my writing plans for this weekend. New goal is to have something to share by the end of Wednesday hopefully.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
A few things happened, but it shouldn’t be too much reading, luckily.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Barnes
“Call me Barnes.” She stuck her hands in her pockets. “That being my regular name. Yours?”
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Loopy replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@koshka I know you’re not asking me, but yeah that’s it
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Got it.
Felicity
Fel sat at the edge of the cave, staring out into the night. She had a pile of rocks next to her to throw at any of the flying creatures that swooped down too close. It was effective enough, and the creatures mostly left her alone now.
As she waited, refusing to let the cold air bother her, something vibrated in the…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Rallascant
Rallascant took the object offered to him and examined it. He didn’t really know what it was, but it was different than anything else in his hoard, which excited him. He grinned at the masked woman.
“Deal.” He held out his hand for a handshake. As she took it, he added, “May I have your name, by the way? I don’t think…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
*Is sick and has nothing to do* *Proceeds to spend 2 hours reading the whole thing and summarizing it* Okay, I’ve got a crazy summary for y’all.
Fantasy Adventure RP so far
“Your characters have been summoned to a fantastical world where war rages between an evil Dark Lord and a determined resistance.” – Jonas
On the outskirts of the city…
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