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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Lukas
“I miss my pani…” Liv said. Her hands slowly filled with water. Lukas blinked a few times, opening and closing his mouth.
“Wai— wha? How did you do that?” He pointed to her hands, his eyes wide.
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Esther replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
Aww, I loved this scene!! 🥰
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Esther replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years ago
Yay! I’m so excited to see how they turn out!!
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Esther replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years ago
Woah… why is her’s so big?? XD
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Esther replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years ago
Hallie

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Esther replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years ago
Easton (I forgot to say he has glasses xp)

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Esther replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years ago
Ooh, this looks so cool! I’d love if you could do a brother and sister for me!
Name: Easton Woodbury
Age: 17
Gender: male
Clothing: long-sleeved sweater, light or dark jeans, sneakers(?)
Time period (Or the time period the fashion replicates): 90s!
Physical appearance: 6’ 0’’; light skin; gray eyes; dirty blonde/light…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
(Sorry I took forever to reply!! Life has been busy and I’m doing the King’s Daughters’ Writing Camp this month)
Lukas
Lukas bit his lip, his gaze roaming the ground as if searching for an answer in the dirt. “W-well, I don’t think H-He’d just stop listening…” he wet his lips. “B-but I can pray for you if-if you want.”…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
Alriiight, Chapter 1. Please tell me if you get overwhelmed with all the feedback, because if that happens, I will gladly pause.
Her father wouldn’t meet her eyes. And in that instant she knew.
Her father didn’t love her.
Sooo I get this weird feeling about Nico. I’m not entirely convinced he doesn’t love them, nor do I kno…[Read more]
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whaley posted an update 2 years ago
Will be gone at camp until maybe Monday, won’t update much if at all until then ;]
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years ago
I might have art soon >:]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Hehe I am waiting for Lois to make his move.
The only part that I didn’t already get was if Seb had knocked them unconscious or just made their brains all fuzzy.
Yep, their brains are just super fuzzy and happy rn 🙂 The idea is for them to do something that generically expresses happiness, like dancing or laughing.
Thanks for e…
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
I have to leave for camp soon, see ya there
what is that pfp
It is a character from a hilarious show; Loopy exposed me to it. Gravity Falls.
Sebastian
When Seb flickered his eyes open, everything blurred at the edges like in a mirage. Something – a hand? – lay on his chest.
“L – Com… Comish…” He rubbed his eye with his chubby fist.…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Writing Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
I was going to do this challenge, but I slept in and then had to run some errands instead. 😞
I think I’m going to try for two hours starting now. I know that isn’t much, but it’s better than the nothing I’ve been doing for years lol
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years ago
Nice! You’re getting good at realism
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@y’all
I think I’m going to take a break from this rp. Not sure for how long. Maybe three weeks?
You know I’ll be back. I’m addicted XD
And I’ll probably wait until after I do the scene with Felicity and Lois on the roof before I actually leave.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@whalekeeper Ok, I understood it much better than I thought I did. The only part that I didn’t already get was if Seb had knocked them unconscious or just made their brains all fuzzy.
Thanks for explaining! I think the lovedream magic system is really interesting and I get excited when you talk about it. -
whaley replied to the topic How dark is too dark? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
If you want to show a sacrifice, I don’t think that’s inherently melodramatic 😊 It only becomes melodrama if you become blinded to story mechanics and the reader’s perspective in everything. Drama is fine as long as you can see everything from a bird’s eye view, and you seem to be a pretty practical person so far XD
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whaley replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
I have to say, you are definitely improving your skills 👌
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whaley replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
Really?!?!
Yep!! XD
Ooh, that’s a good point!!! My thought process was just that Kaden and Sevryn didn’t realize how the oath would affect them.
Both ways work well!! Whatever makes more sense to you; I’m just throwing random ideas to help you brainstorm 😉
Question…why is this a problem?
I think what Jonas was mention…[Read more]
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