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Esther replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Oooh, I like it!! My only critique is the first half of the chapter…. It was great until I found out Sef was only 4 at this point. It just felt a little too complex to be coming from a 4 year old, ya know? Maybe simplify it somehow? Keep the same emotions that Sef is feeling, but see if you can bring it down to a 4 year o…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 7 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 7 months ago
Ooohhhh, interesting….👀
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Esther replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 7 months ago
This looks interesting! I can’t promise I’ll be able to keep up, but I might just stalk the topic. We’ll see!
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
*Nudges your face with my boot*
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Loopy replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
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Loopy replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 7 months ago
(Oh my gosh, I was about to use the middle finger emoji to point up 😭 I am so stupid lol! I never EVER use that emoji and I wasn’t looking so I clicked it and then quickly deleted it 😭😭😭😭)
XD I would have laughed so hard if you did. Don’t worry, I wouldn’t believe that you would intentionally do that. I’ve almost acciden…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
He took her “try to keep up” as a little insulting. There was no way that this girl was faster than he when he charmed the wind.
Lol Fel’s just being cocky. It would take a lot for her to acknowledge that she is not on the same level as all the super powered characters.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@linus-smallprint @highscribeofaetherium
I haven’t actually watched either of these seasons all the way through. I know they are considered some of the best of Ninjago, and from what I know of them, Lloyd is pushed through some very interesting character development, but I don’t like the Oni and the Garmadon resurrection. (One problem I wish Nin…
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 year, 7 months ago
@linus-smallprint
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 year, 7 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium
So many legos… *Nods* Our first exposure to Ninjago came from an old garage sale set. It was Jay’s jet/airplane thingy and one of the Fangpyre soldiers. -
whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 year, 7 months ago
This is true. I feel that Master of the Mountain had very random focus episodes, so Cole didn’t get as much story besides leading the quest. But I loved his mother’s lore.
Hot take (actually this is more of an unknown take): Sons of Garmadon and Hunted were great seasons for Cole specifically.
Oh boy,…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 year, 7 months ago
Ah, Ninjago. #GiveColeAFocusSeason
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 year, 7 months ago
I agree with Linus that you should only have a few split groups. I personally don’t mind having groups over one large group. That would be one way to divide your characters so they each get a unique perspective in a unique plot thread.
This is a very common way to handle multiple protagonists. Series like Stormlight Archive and Redwall do this…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible posted an update 1 year, 7 months ago
My brother just accidentally gave me the plot twist idea of the century. I need emotional help here – both my stories have freakish endings now.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@rae Nice, I like it. Always liked that historical event, it reminds me of how people in the Civil War had to fight against their own relatives. It shows how some Germans saw other human beings in the trenches, and managed to relate to them, which is a really brave thing to do in a war.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle @loopylin @rae @raxforge @jonas @grcr @hybridlore
Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Group 1)
The hand motions were a little unfamiliar, but Marcel could guess from Leon’s expression that they weren’t in any immediate danger.
Marcel made the same hand motion. “We’re good.”
He was slightly dissatisfied with the answer, since Felicity and…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Don’t test me. I’ll target you next! 😆
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle @rae @raxforge @loopylin @hybridlore @jonas @grcr
Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Group 1)
Marcel strained, trying to listen to Leon’s reply. Something was very wrong with his ears. Hopefully it wasn’t permanent. The buzzing had escalated into a high-pitched siren.
“Monsters… Huge…” Then Leon shook his head.
Marcel winced and…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
That’s… four snowballs…
Give me a moment, y’all
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NOOO *Whams you with a giant ball of snow* *Now you’re rolling down the hill*
@you +6 snowballs 💨⚪💨⚪💨⚪💨⚪💨⚪💨⚪
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All he did was play some Dune music on his computer. XD