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Loopy replied to the topic How do you want to improve? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 4 months ago
I just need to write.
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Loopy replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
But ya callan sucks
So much.
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Loopy replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
I feel like my writing is subpar tbh….but idk sometimes posting it elsewhere helps? idk…I give myself such a hard time. I’m just writing it down, and I have to remind myself that every single second XD
I feel that. We often need to remind ourselves that our writing doesn’t need to be perfect, it just needs to be. At least, that’…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Awww November 🧡 I really want Ara to show up and just smack Callan across the face. Probably won’t happen though lol
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
I’m glad to see you writing again! Sometimes it can feel like such a chore. ❤️ But I think it just takes some time. I’ve also been helping Loops (a teensy-weensy bit) and I’ve thought about reading through the whole roleplay. Even if we weren’t the best writers, and we still aren’t, it’s still fun.
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Loopy replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Yayy! I’ve been copying down the entire school rp into a google doc, and reading your old writing is making me miss your characters so much.
I’m glad you got to take a break, but I’m also glad you’re getting back into it :]
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whaley the great and terrible posted an update 1 year, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Hey girl, are you interested in exchanging emails? You don’t have to if you don’t want to. 🙂
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 4 months ago
I’m going to try and look at all of this when possible.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Art/Illustration Critique in the forum Art 1 year, 4 months ago
Thanks for the extra ideas. I bet I can make a list of things to focus on with line thickness.
Nice drawing!! I always like how dedicated you are with the textures, such as the wood and brick floor. that takes more patience than I have at this time.
I agree with Keilah on both those points. Another thing – Alan’s left arm might…[Read more] -
Esther replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Awww! Esther!!! That means literally so so SO much to me!!
I appreciate you so much, you’re amazing 🥺🥺💜💜💜💜
💕💕💕
So for a while I stopped writing altogether, because even when I would try to write happy things that didn’t include violence or too much evil or darkness, somehow the topic would always shift. And my heart was…
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Esther replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
It also reminds me how God uses the same talents of different people for different purposes. For example, you tend to gravitate towards darker themes (not in a bad way!) and deal with difficult topics that need to be dealt with and seen in the light of God’s love. On the other hand, I tend to focus on the smaller, everyday struggles I personally f…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Sara Sara Sara Sara Sara Sara….
Girl this is literally so good and I wish I had gotten to it sooner!!!
I can tell you poured your heart into this and can see it on every page. I’m so glad you decided to go on with this. It has already impacted me in little ways in the short time I read it and I know God will use it to imp…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic How do you want to improve? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 4 months ago
Tagging some people to make them aware of this area on KP!
@mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @freed_and_redeemed @rae @godlyfantasy12 @theshadow @princesachronicle22
Y’all are also free to answer last week’s question if you like.
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whaley the great and terrible started the topic How do you want to improve? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 4 months ago
How do you want to improve?
(To be clear, choose a couple writing skills you want to improve, or a bad habit, and explain!)I’m pretty good at writing things in an abnormal way (such as strange metaphors), but I don’t think abnormality is definitely, certainly, indubitably good. It can be confusing. It’s often detail-oriented, without giving the…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 4 months ago
I think the rough sketch looks really good, regardless of whether it’s accurate. I like the shirt folds. (I cannot figure out cloth for the life of me.)
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 4 months ago
Oh my goodness I have been trying to log into KP
Oh nooo, Wyoh is banishing you too? I haven’t had any problems, so maybe I’m a ghost whisperer.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Art/Illustration Critique in the forum Art 1 year, 4 months ago
*is in bliss*
XD I was pretty satisfied too. While drawing, that is.
The harder or darker a line, the more shadow I expect it to be in. If it is light and slightly broken, I expect it to be in direct light or even a glare.
Ooohh, how did I not think of this?? That is a very good point, thank you. I suppose it might help if I fill…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 4 months ago
AAHH it looks so good!!! I love how you did the hair texture!!
That’s definitely a good representation of her. And it didn’t take you very long either, that’s crazy. <3
I don’t even know why. I think it was trying to kill me or something.
So you risked your life on my behalf. 🤣 Thank you so much. <3
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Just curious, what’s with your current signature? The other mother never said that… Also she’s a creepy villainous monster…
Sorry, I’m just confused lol
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon
Putting another character in here
Lois
“Hey, Brea,” Lois said after finding his sister’s hiding spot in the library. She turned around in her chair to face him, looking surprised.
“I just got Mother’s letter saying you were coming. Why she didn’t bother to use the telephone is beyond me. How are you doing?”…[Read more]
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mm, not sure, maybe later down the road? I’d have to ask (:
Gotcha, that’s fine 😝