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whaley replied to the topic I'd like some thoughts on this scene in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks ago
It’s good! It gives a very clear picture of what’s happening, and how guilty Nahim is, while also confirming that the author knows it isn’t Nahim’s fault. Gives a clear picture of how his mindset needs to change.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
Also Barnes doesn’t have to be there all the time, and she can’t be in two places at once so she won’t eliminate all the fighting opportunities in the story. I just felt like there could be some adult character to balance out all the chaos whenever we need her.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
I figured if any other agents pop up, it’s Barnes’ responsibility as a new authority, so she’s going to attempt wiping them out as soon as possible. But if they don’t appear then she will just do a sweep of the school and everything will be fine. It’s your call.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
I think he wants some indication of where any remaining agents are.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
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whaley replied to the topic Gauging Interest in a Special New RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
My interest is also piqued so… XD
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
@raxforge @rae @koshka @ellette-giselle
Marcel
“One, don’t go looking for fights; two, someone who is innocent might get hurt,” Barnes said. “You may leave now, but I want to see the kids who were being attacked as soon as possible.”
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
@rae @raxforge @koshka @ellette-giselle
Marcel
The woman nodded and turned her attention. “Did you see this happen, Marcel?”
The winged boy looked up at her incredulously. “You know who I am?”
“To make it easy: who among the catalog of students do you think I would know about the most?”
“Ha, okay… I didn’t see the fight happen. These guys…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
@rae @raxforge @koshka @ellette-giselle
Marcel
The tall woman looked at Alpha and Rax, who had stopped talking. Marcel could swear she raised an eyebrow under the mask. “Whichever one of you is Alpha Grath, please explain what happened.”
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
Hehehe… This is way too accurate, I doubt anyone is going to keep the students in line.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
Why do I always somehow miss all the major conflicts that happen in this school? My twins leave Rory and then like two rps later this whole thing with the agents starts XD
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
Felicity
“Well, I’m in art and pre algebra…” she drifted off mid sentence, thinking hard. Then she laughed. “Honestly, I don’t know the rest. It’s only my second day and I’ve been skipping class so much. Drives Lois crazy. If we were in any of the same classes, I wouldn’t know.”
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Anyone remember old animal rp? I miss reading it
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Loopy replied to the topic Gauging Interest in a Special New RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 1 day ago
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whaley replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
I would join, but my character is very humanoid. Basically just a human with fur and horns.
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