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Snapper replied to the topic Hiring! Requirements: General Helpfulness in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 11 months ago
<em@rolena-hatefield How harsh do you want me to be? *evil grin*
Ah, well. Only a few things. First off, when a new person starts speaking, it begins a new paragraph. Like this:
“Don’t tell me what to do, Johnny!” Bully Bob growled.
“I can’t give you my milk money, Bob.” the kid sniffled, “I just can’t.”
“Well, you’d better. Because otherwise…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Hiring! Requirements: General Helpfulness in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 11 months ago
@rolena-hatefield How harsh do you want me to be? *evil grin*
Ah, well. Only a few things. First off, when a new person starts speaking, it begins a new paragraph. Like this:
“Don’t tell me what to do, Johnny!” Bully Bob growled.
“I can’t give you my milk money, Bob.” the kid sniffled, “I just can’t.”
“Well, you’d better. Because otherwise…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 11 months ago
Extremely…p.a.i.n.f.u.l.l. *dies* (Hey @daeus! Can I have that ice cream now?)
Well, the good part is that I’m getting a lot of good ideas and actually saving myself around four to five months of time in the long wrong. Believe me, this is definitely worth it. 😀
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 11 months ago
@daeus @kate-flournoy
Yay! Good job! That’s a lot!
I edited and wrote, bringing myself to around a grand total oooooffff……….119!!!!!!! *audience claps* *bows*
Yeah, I know it’s not that much, but yay editing. I’m changing quite a bit around, so what’s done is done. -
Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 11 months ago
@daeus @kate-flournoy
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Snapper replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 9 years, 11 months ago
I also like the animal version of Robin Hood, where Robin Hood is a fox and Prince John is a lion. That’s one of my favorites; and along those lines, The Emperor’s New Groove. Oh, Kronk. That one never gets old.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 11 months ago
@daeus @kate-flournoy I edited through 1363 words. Not wrote, edited. 😀
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 11 months ago
@daeus I’m here!
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Snapper replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 9 years, 11 months ago
@ingridrd @timothy-young @mark-kamibayaI love the How To Train Your Dragon movies so much, though I can’t decide between the first and second. Probably the first for its in-depth characters and music. Thanks John Powell! And the Princess Bride. You can never go wrong there. ;p
But my favorite movie? I have way too many…
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Snapper replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 9 years, 11 months ago
@ingridrd @timothy-young I love the How To Train Your Dragon movies so much, though I can’t decide between the first and second. Probably the first for its in-depth characters and music. Thanks John Powell! And the Princess Bride. You can never go wrong there. ;p
But my favorite movie? I have way too many…
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Snapper replied to the topic Stop motion in the forum Film 9 years, 11 months ago
@bluejay I’m afraid I can’t help you here. I haven’t had read those yet. Sorry…
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 11 months ago
*bows* Thank you. 😀
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 11 months ago
@rolena-hatfield
Snacks are always important. I took a break to get cookies as well, so I guess we’re even. :p
I wrote 1,809 words. No, I’m not kidding. Don’t ask how I did that because I have no idea. -
Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 11 months ago
@rolena-hatfield Aaaaannd I’m still here. Ready for another round. On your marks, get set, write on!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 11 months ago
@the-bean Okay, now I’m leaving. All in all, I wrote 702 words.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 11 months ago
@the-bean Oh, didn’t realize you were writing. If you’re still going, I’ll still be here.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 11 months ago
@kate-flournoy @rolena-hatfield
Okay, I’ll take lunch since we all seem to be breaking for now. I wrote 533 words. Thanks for writing!
For future reference to anyone who will be writing in the future, I should be writing most of the day.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 11 months ago
@kate-flournoy @rolena-hatfield
Okay, I’ll take lunch since we all seem to be breaking for now. I wrote 533 words. Thanks for writing!
For future reference to anyone who will be writing in the future, I should be writing most of the day. -
Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 11 months ago
@rolena-hatfield Yay! I’ll be getting lunch sooner or later, but I should be around for most of the day.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 11 months ago
@kate-flournoy @rolena-hatfield
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