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@f5a8c3e92 Phooey, I missed the critiquing party. And @Emma-Flournoy, with her wonderful thoroughness, has pretty much read my mind on the subject of the second draft. XD So, yeah. Good job.

Oh, one thing: That first part, when Halle’s running from bad guys, and then wakes up in a castle. That confused me just a litte. Was running from bad guys a…[Read more]

@f5a8c3e92 Phooey, I missed the critiquing party. And @Emma-Flournoy, with her wonderful thoroughness, has pretty much read my mind on the subject of the second draft. XD So, yeah. Good job.

@ethryndal I’m even later than you are.
@moriahS *bows* Forgive me.
That aside, I welcome you to Kingdom Pen! Do you play any instruments?

Oh, and did I hear that you’re left handed? That’s so cool! My sister’s left handed. I *sniff* unfortunately, am…not.

@That_writer_girl_99 *looks disdainfully down nose* Well, you’re forgiven…I suppose… 😉

Even though the topic has totally derailed, I’m still going to be contrary and pop in with a sentence about what was happening two pages ago.

Yay, @Kate-Flournoy and @Emma-Flournoy, that’s great! *explosions of glitter* 😀 Hey, what song did you do?

@MoriahS Yeesh, I never thought I would turn into the welcomer who’s always late, but it’s become a trend of late. *ahem* Welcome to the Kingdom of Pen! (To be completely cliche…) It’s a great little place, as I’m sure you’ll soon find. See you around! *disappears in a cloud of glitter*

@that_writer_girl_99 I’m signing out now. I wrote 374 words, and was distracted, but either way, thanks for writing for the time being!

@jenali @daeus @that_writer_girl_99 @northerner @anyone-else I’m probably going to be writing.

@that_writer_girl_99 And even after all that, I forgot to tag you. 😛

I’m not sure what others said, but this is my review.
I really love this! The whole thing, especially the plot. The idea is great, and I cannot wait to see what happens next. But as for my critical side. If you feel as if I am melting your work, please tell me. I don’t want to be too mean. 😀

This is the life I wish I had. This is the normal…

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@that_writer_girl_99 😀 Don’t worry. Dragons don’t like rebellions.

@that_writer_girl_99 @theliterarycrusader Looks like I chose our king well. You all are very loyal. 😛 (maybe I won’t go to forum prison for the insurrection.)

@northerner You can take me to prison now. *holds out talons and wings for handcuffs* *resolves that they won’t take her without a fight*

@theliterarycrusader Ah…yeah. I was totally in charge of the insurrection.

@f5a8c3e92 Huh, guess I haven’t heard that word enough, and ‘pried’ would work too. 😛
Oh, and I see now how that means only Sawyer, but that was definitely not my first thought.

@daeus @jenali I’m signing off as well. I wrote 1100 words, and conquered a rough spot in the running of the plot. for the most part, I’m happy with what I got done.

@daeus Coolio.