@lightoverdarkness6
Active 3 months, 3 weeks ago- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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Light replied to the topic First chapter of my book . . . in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Hello and nice to meet you!
Nice to meet you too :D!!
Thank you! Arien is a kind of obscure character in The Silmarillion, and when I found it, I thought that’s cool, I think I’ll make that my pen name! 🙂
You’re welcome!! Oh, cool! I haven’t read the Silmarillion yet, but I’m gonna try and work up the courage to buy it and…read it XD.
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Light replied to the topic Hey Everyone!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
1. The only thing I don’t like about my pleco is how much it hides! Sometimes I don’t see it for days at a time lol 🙂
1. Oh, yeah, lol. I had a baby bluegill that I caught in the wild, and he would stay hidden all the time too! In the summer, I’ll catch fish and maybe a salamander, and I keep them in my outside aquarium, and obs…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Oh thanks! I’m so glad you like Lesli and Tauren!
You’re sooo welcome!! yes! they’re so Good!! 😀
I’m really savoring everything about how living underground is different, because they don’t know anything different….or do they? 🤨
Okay! Ooh mysterious… XD.
Anyways, 😂
It just y’know.. has to do with future thingys 😉…
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Light posted a new activity comment 3 years, 6 months ago
Oh I love Elf too!! Me and my dad both love it. It’s hilarious!! The Chosen is so good too!! The Grinch is really funny. We usually watch the live action one; but The animated is really good too!
Some of my other favorites are: A Timeless Christmas, It’s A Wonderful Life, Christmas Jars, Christmas Oranges, and…[Read more] -
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Light replied to the topic Russo-Ukrainian War Novel. Please Critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Oh, I really like this!! I love the set up of their home and family life.
Just wondering, how far into the Russo-Ukranian war is it? From what I understand, is it just beginning?
Yeah, @mineralizedwritings tip about changing up the action words with ing and no ing could help the story flow a little better.
Anyway, I loved it! Can’t…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Thanks! 😊 He’s kinda my favorite.
You’re welcome! Yeah, I can tell :).
…but don’t tell Ed and El. I’d like to keep my life XD
Oh yes! ! don’t want to lose a new friend! I won’t tell. XD
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Thank you! Okay, I thought so. I really like Dante’s character! He’s very intriguing. I love his personality!!
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Light replied to the topic So…my draft has finally started…and I'd like some thoughts so far! 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
OH my gosh!! My heart!! RIKER!! it’s not your fault baby!! Not at all!!!
AND LEON AND ADELHIEDE!!! My goodness! Your sweet charries. LOVE THEM SO MUCH!!
UGH HANS!!!! YOU BETTER WATCH YOURSELF…
Girl!!! You did great on showing their feelings and overall reaction!! I mean, it’s heartbreaking, but you did a great job making my…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic So…my draft has finally started…and I'd like some thoughts so far! 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
AHHH!!! Thank y’all for all the kind words!!! <333
You’re so welcome, sweet friend!!!! 😀 🙂 <3 <3
And y’all…because of all of y’all’s encouragement, I’ve officially reached 37 pages in my draft of this book.
Thank y’all so much. 😭
Oh my goodness!!! That’s awesome!! You ARE SO WELCOME GIRL!! I’m so glad we were able to help encou…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Oh, I’m so sorry!! I’m just rocking the ‘mistaking someones character for another’ thing this month XD, right @mineralizedwritings ? XD.
For some reason, I thought Kad was your character i guess bc he’s in the group with Eddie and Ellie (Those are your charries right?) and Dante and Rueben and others.
You can probably just ignore my…
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Okay! Good ideas! Kad, you mean?
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Light replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
TOTALLY!!!!
YES!! XD
Ok I will. 🙂
Hehe…your story is so cute. I love how…
The puppie’s parents were not sweet to them and they died. Heavenly Father killed the parents because they were mean to their children.
That’s so good!!! 😀Yay!! I just read the 2nd chapter, and it’s so cute!! That’s actually really good for 10-11! I’m gonna g…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Your tag didn’t work 🙂
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Light replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
freedomwriter76 @loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @felicity
Okay, heres the beginning of my old story, that I already posted so you won’t be completely lost bc it just plunges right back in XD.
Once apon a time there was a camel. The camel loved to drink some water at the forest and he swam across the ocean so he could get some water…
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Light replied to the topic Introducing a Fellow Writer in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
I get that!!! 😉
Thats good! Sometimes I feel like I’m so awkward and nobody gets it XDD.
Maybe so. 🙂
Yeah!
Lol, I get that. XDXDXDXD
🙂 XDD
Agreed!!! 😀 It’s just a great story all in all. 😉
Yes!!! I actually have a sweet memory watching the newer one! I was about 6, at my grandparents house, listening to my dad and grandpa ta…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
YESSSSS!!!! Tell it, sister!!! XDXDXDXD
YESSSS!!!! Hans is my least favorite. I think. It’s hard to choose between Adoulphus, Diethrich, and Has. THEY ARE ALL GOING DOWN!!!
You are sooo welcome!!! 😀 <3333
I’m feeling better already :)!!
Also, I just read your newest chapter, and it is SOOO GOOD!!!! LOVE IT!!
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Light replied to the topic So…my draft has finally started…and I'd like some thoughts so far! 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
UGHHH RIKER!!!! PRECIOUS RIKER!! I LOVE HIM!!!
OH, and GREAT cliffhanger ;). I’m dying to know what happens!!
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Light replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Thank you sister! Sending a prayer up for you!!!
You’re so welcome!! Thank you so much!! <3 <3 <3
Yeah I did, just one chapter…but somebody said they wanted more…I forget who…so I’ll probably put some more on here soon.
I found yours!! Yes, please share the second chapter!! It was so cute! I loved the historical vibe–even if you didn’t…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
I am so sorry I’m just now responding!! Thank you for tagging me :). I LOVE IT!!! OMG sweet Tauren and Lesli!!
And Keiryn!! I feel myself wanting to like him, but also, not. XDD But i’m starting to get a feel for him :).
That’s cool that they live underground! Unless it’s like a spoiler that you don’t want to share yet, you…[Read more]
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