Lightningmouse

@lightningmouse  Hello! Your story sounds super intriguing, and I would read it. I like how you have a twist on the otherwise stereotypical “rebellious royal” and how you gave Rafe a superpower. That said, your synopsis is rather long.

personally, I would use a different word for your government. maybe Imperium from the Latin word for power? The…[Read more]

@lightningmouse I love vigilantes, so it sounds really interesting to me.  (I also love the name Rafe, but that is kind of irrelevant.) 🙂

The synopsis is a little long to put on the back of a book, though I have seen some pretty long book-back synopses.  I can’t tell you about saying the same thing in fewer words because I have the tendency to u…[Read more]

@lightningmouse  Mm-HMM 😀

What genre is it? The title sounds like fantasy, but the synopsis sounds like modern or something…

Yep, he does and he is! His cousin (who is older than him by some years) accidentally helped him realize the corruption when he arrested Rafe’s parents for treason (or similar; still working that out) when Rafe was young. Rafe has a position in the government because of his relations, but is actually just doing what he’s told by them as a…[Read more]

Hi, @lightningmouse! I’m glad you’re back! I’m always glad when a long-gone Kapeefer finds his/her way back here 😀

Sounds interesting! So does Rafe want to start a revolution against the government? Is he a part of the government?

I think I would read it 🙂

Well, that isn’t how you spell “lightning”, now is it, Ingrid?
Let me try again.
@lightningmouse

@lightningmouse OOOHHHH….
Gotcha.
Yep. That makes a bit more sense now. 😛

@lightningmouse Well, when I saw your username I was going to ask you if you were the same person, but that comment answered that question. XD
Darkspeedyness!!! 8D

@aislinn-mollisong Hello! Cyborgs are cool too though. *nods*

@salome01w4g Neat!

@lightningmouse Unfortunately that right there is “fake news.” 😛 We’re testing this out on a two-year old backup of the site, and we’d been running a contest at that time.

@lightningmouse Er…alrighty then. 😛

Hey people. *tips hat grinningly*
There’s this book I just read called Eats, Shoots and Leaves, by Lynn Truss. It’s non-fiction—about punctuation. But it’s not a long or dull read at all, and is funny and very informative/helpful. Especially for people like writers who’d use punctuation more than usual. 😉
The only objection would be: it has a…[Read more]

Hello everybody tagged below!

I’ve got a bunch of unfinished drafts of stories (plus the finished draft for the Pilot for Aquila) and I was wondering if any of you would like to alpha-read some of them (and, perhaps, beta-read the finished draft). I need input on what I’m working on because I’ve got some stories I’m stuck on.

So, for those of…[Read more]

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