Lightningmouse

@mariposa  That’s fantastic!  *stares in awe*

@inkling-for-christ  First off, great job!  And congratulations on being brave enough to want feedback.  Now for my suggestions…*rubs hands together*

Okay, this may come as a shock to you, but my first thought was “delete the entire first chapter”.  It seems sort of unnecessary and a lot of it just dumps info instead of showing.  (Sorry, tryi…[Read more]

@salome01w4g  YESSS!!!!  Praise the Lord!

Still here…..

@jess-penrose Oh right. I forgot you guys were in the future.

@shannon @jess-penrose @emily @dekreel

*peers into emptiness* Helloooo? Anyone writing…?

@dragon-snapper  Not too shabby, my friend.  😉  In other words, it’s really good.  I loooove the collage.  Nice work.  *high five*

@perfectfifths   The Fellowship of the Ring…I think Pippin says it.  😉

@salome01w4g  That’s rough…praying for you, friend!

@dekreel Ah…What I have to do is bookmark the page, cause otherwise, yes, I don’t think kingdompen has made a way to keep that saved.

@emily Adios.

@dekreel Isn’t it? 😀

@shannon Then I will see you when you return.

@shannon Hola!

😀

@emily I’m actually on the first question, because I’m doing a different character now.

@dekreel Hi! Yep, all the same one. And it’s awesome. *nods*

@emily Heya!

@dekreel @shannon @emily Hi guys! I’m here, filling out the character questionnaire too! 😀

@no-one I’m out now.

@dekreel @emily @shannon I’m characterizing.

@emily Well, when you come back–whenever that is–tell me what you need help with. You can always ask me by the messaging thing too. 😀 I’d be happy to help.

@daeus @dekreel @ingridrd @shannon @anyone I’m still going…

@emily Yay! Fantasy. Gotta love fantasy. 😀 If you want, I may be able to help with your minor trouble. Only if you want though. I can be unhelpful too. ;P

@emily Ooh, Katalina. That’s a great name! Which story is this for?