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@jenwriter17 Ha. I actually have a KP Cinema video about cliches in dystopian novels coming out sometime this month. xD So a lot of my “advice” would be in there. I wouldn’t say oppressive governments are cliched because they’re required for that genre, but I would recommend studying classic dystopias like Animal Farm, Fahrenheit 451, Brave New…[Read more]

@that_writer_girl_99  Here is Evyn!  I wasn’t sure how long her hair is so I went long…

@dekreel  *bows*

@that_writer_girl_99  How long is Evyn’s hair?

@dekreel  Here are Kevin and Phoebe!  *wipes brow*  Oh dear, it took me way too long to get her nose right…

@that_writer_girl_99  Oooooh….I want to draw Evyn…and possibly one of the boys.  They all sound like great characters! 😉

@dekreel  I’d like to try Kevin and possibly Phoebe… 🙂

@pickupyourpenandwrite That makes sense; I’ve been there as well in the past. Do you have a clear idea on what parts of your story you need to improve on?

@sleepwalkingmk Huh. I’m not seeing anything in spam, so I’m not sure what happened on that front. :/

Either way, I like the tension between the character’s plot and thematic goals there. I’m a bit unsure, however, from what you’ve said if your plot goal is really the plot goal of your story. It seems like the protagonist stops trying to achieve…[Read more]

Welcome to the forum, @pickupyourpenandwrite! Glad you joined us. 🙂 Great work in passing the 50,000 word mark with your latest novel! Do you have a revision plan in place yet for the work?

@warrenluther04 I know for a fact that I REALLY WANT TO READ IT. *cough* As for posting it… Well, it depends on how long it is …

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How long is it?

@pickupyourpenandwrite  Hey, friend!  Glad to have you aboard.  *salutes*

@pickupyourpenandwrite HI!

Yes, the other person we have from England is @theacornman unless I’m wrong. And I am never wrong.

Anywho, back to introduction. *shakes hand wildly* hi hi and doubly hi! Cozy crime sounds interesting–and funny. 😀 What’s your favorite music group?

@jessi-rae  I’d like to read your story sometime!  And you’re welcome!  😉

@jessi-rae  Well…I found time.

And a little closer…

This look anything like her??

@perfectfifths @dekreel @notawriter @catwing

Ike would rather…

Be painted by a realistic artist–that way his eyes wouldn’t be so big.

Tree, so that no one would sit on him.

Sky-diving, cause at least he can still breath without having to use an oxygen tank.

Learn an instrument, because only servants do cooking. (And Louise, Ike…[Read more]

@jessi-rae  I might attempt her, if I find some time today.  🙂

@skredder  Aaannnnd now I have to go…ugh.  The story of my life.  Talk to you later!

@aislinn-mollisong and @skredder

If you two are still here, I have a couple minutes to spare.  🙂  Also doing some worldbuilding.

@warrenluther04 Here he is! What do you think?

Cole Avis:

As for your fanfiction, I think it might be okay to post it so long as you credit that it’s based off the Star Wars Universe. 😀 If you still have concerns, I’d ask @aratrea or @daeus about that.