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@seekjustice  *Gasps* You are about to have posted 800 times!!!

@rochellaine  I’m here now! Nope, you read that right! I’ve never been in Writer’s Corner before, I didn’t really know how it worked, so I just didn’t really pay much attention to it. :/

Wow, @dekreel . I can really relate to this. You know, KP is such an amazing place, full of encouraging people. But it can also be used against us when we fall into comparison- which I did without even realizing it. I started to think things like “you shouldn’t even be on this website, you’re not a real writer like they are” and “why do you even…[Read more]

Ok, thanks @rochellaine ! That’s something I really hadn’t thought about before @daeus said it, and I do see where that would be helpful.

Thanks @dekreel ! I will have to remember to show, not tell.

I’m not really sure how this works, but I’m writing…

@jenwriter17  Oh, Thanks! The second one was from my WIP, but I’m not sure I’ll keep it because it has kinda taken a new direction.

There wasn’t anything you see I could improve on? Maybe it’s decent, I could have just looked at it waaay to much.

@jenwriter17   Oh my! That was awesome!

Also @notawriter  I really love the word “Nextly” 😉

@dekreel   @jenwriter17  @notawriter  @daeus Ok, so here goes… I honestly am not sure what exactly is wrong with my dialogue, it just seems off. Without further hesitation, I present to you some of my conversations:

“You did a really good job with your prayer! Who wrote it again? Daisy paused, her hand hovering over a box of tea boasting a choc…[Read more]

@jenwriter17  I’m not reading, but I am writing.  I hope your reading goes well!

Thanks @jenwriter17 ! This is exciting! 🙂

@jenwriter17  This sounds really cool! can I join in too?

@rochellaine @jenwriter17  Welp, I gotta head out.  Happy writing!  🙂

@rochellaine  Oh no you’re good!  I didn’t realize you were tagging people in the Comic Poem Tag topic…I thought you were just working on a poem to post on the forum to be critiqued or whatever.  *sighs*  My brain sometimes.  🙂

@rochellaine  Oh, oh!  Me too!!!!  *jumps up and down*

@jenwriter17  I definitely will join in with the reading, but I probably won’t be able to discuss too much *coughschoolcough*.  This is a great idea!

@rochellaine  You know what?  I’ll just leave….😜

jkjkjk

I am writing the second book in my trilogy…and brainstorming about prophesies, names and crosswalks (don’t ask).  What about you?

@jenwriter17 @rochellaine  Me is here.  😉