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Snapper replied to the topic Book Cover Opinions #2 in the forum Art 9 years, 8 months ago
@daeus Just a thing about that guy (who I’m assuming is Edwin Brooke)…at first glance it looks as if he is holding an axe, not a cane. (or is it even a cane) And I also am not sure about all the faded letters in his face.
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Snapper replied to the topic Merry Christmas! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@rolena-hatfield I really enjoy getting together with family and spending time with them.
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Snapper replied to the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 8 months ago
Otherwise, @daeus I think it’s great!
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Snapper replied to the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 8 months ago
@daeus Very good!
I have a few suggestions, though.
In the second sentence, you use the word ‘his’ quite a bit. Overly so.His dedication to his wronged family is powerful enough to bring him through any trial, but his youth and inexperience hold him back.
Maybe you could write it as: “Dedication to his wronged family can bring him…[Read more]
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Anne Swiftblade replied to the topic Rogue One in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
I agree wholeheartedly that this movie is AMAZING! The plot and characters are superb! Disney out did itself and left no plot wholes that I can find. I think Rouge One is probably my new favorite Star Wars movie 😀
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Anne Swiftblade replied to the topic Illustrations and Personal Opinions Regarding Them in the forum Art 9 years, 8 months ago
Well, @i-j-anderson, I have a love for children’s books with tons of fun colorful pictures 😉
(@daeus I love that picture book idea!)
However in other books I prefer a small amount of black and white drawing. Not too much color for me 😛 But I love pictures so they don’t really bother me. -
Snapper started the topic Merry Christmas! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
I know that some of you don’t celebrate it as much as I do (we go all out), but I wanted to say Merry Christmas.
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Snapper started the topic in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
To those of you who do, and those who do not, celebrate Christmas, I wish you all a Merry Christmas and Merry Christmas Eve anyway!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
I’m beginning to feel very alone, actually. Is there anyone on here who does the normal Christmas thing? (i.e. presents, Christmas service {this year it’s on Sunday! Yay!}, Christmas tree, Christmas feast, Christmas cookies, Christmas lights)???
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@kate-flournoy Facepalms. 😛
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@kate-flournoy Facepalms. They say so much in once movement. 😛
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@kate-flournoy Blue paint. 😛
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Snapper replied to the topic Hope finally has her wish. in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 9 months ago
@bluejay Well, the swords have some plastic in them, which really hurts on the head, especially when the foam falls off. Ouch. But yeah, if you only use those, then ouch. ouch ouch. More ouch than melted chairs. Which I did not do. 😛
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@daeus 🙁 Aw, didn’t mean to singe them. I really did find your pun funny! I like puns!!! @kate-flournoy @bluejay I’m still editing, but I’ve snapped through three pages.
I have a pun for you all. What’s blue and smells like red paint?And @daeus, what I meant by I wasn’t ready to answer was that I was elsewhere at the moment. Flying the night…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@daeus 🙁 Aw, didn’t mean to singe them. I really did find your pun funny! I like puns!!! @kate-flournoy @bluejay I’m still editing, but I’ve snapped through three pages.
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Snapper replied to the topic Hope finally has her wish. in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 9 months ago
@bluejay Nerf war is where you get together all of your Nerf weapons (guns, axes, machines, swords, all the stuff) and fight. Everything is foam, so it’s really fun and doesn’t really hurt. The best ones are the unplanned ones… heh heh heh. Do you have Nerf in Australia?
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Snapper replied to the topic Hope finally has her wish. in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 9 months ago
@bluejay Like Nerf war? I’ve been hit multiple times with a Nerf sword before, and I’ve also played Nerf capture the flag with friends before. So fun!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@daeus @kate-flournoy
Hilarious.
Be assured, @daeus I got it. I’ll admit I wasn’t ready to answer yet. HA. HA. 😛 -
Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@daeus @kate-flournoy I’m going to be editing.
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Snapper replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 9 years, 9 months ago
@ethryndal The book or the movie? I can watch a movie once and memorize it. A movie I watched three years ago I completely remember. But the book, I hardly remember that well. And as a general rule, I try not to melt humans, especially not elves. I’m sure Galadriel would send a fellowship out to get me if I did that to you. 😛 No, I’m more worried…[Read more]
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