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@hope Nice work. Like I mentioned with Audrey, you will also want to think about the physical consequences of these experiments along with the mental consequences to really display poetic justice powerfully. so you may want to work on that. Other than that, these look great!

@hope Sounds great!

@ethryndal Looks like a good basic setup there. Tying back to the theme, would you say your protagonist’s initial Experiment in Living really has to do with the fact that they superior races have more intrinsic worth to them?

Yes; absolutely! Developing Experiments in Living for other characters is crucial to broadening your story’s theme. We will…[Read more]

@daeus I got 315 words. Thanks for writing!

@kate-flournoy Great! I wrote 1156 words.
@daeus Are you still going?

@daeus Huzzah! BTW, you’re just about to banish me.

@kate-flournoy That’s fine, I was just wondering. 😛 I am still going as well.

@daeus @kate-flournoy Are you two still going, or am I alone?

@kate-flournoy Okay, I’m back now.
*sits at desk* Now, lets see if we can’t finish this writing dare. 😀

@kate-flournoy 😛 Heh, well, I’ll be back in a few minutes. Lunch shouldn’t take too long.

@daeus Ah, lunch sounds good. I edited some of that dragon story that I’m writing. The one where you banish me. 😛 I also added about 234 words to that and wrote 165 words to something else. I’ll be back later. Maybe I can finish that dragon story.

@daeus *fifteen minutes later…* Okay. NOW I’m back. 😛

@daeus I have small chore I need to do, but I’ll be back in about five minutes.

@daeus It must.

@daeus I can join you.

@anne-of-lothlorien
You will be greatly missed. We who remain shall bear this loss with heavy hearts and hopeful spirits that you will one day return to the great Kingdom of Pen. Fare thee well!
In other words, bye and God bless! 😉

I’m sad to leave, but I must. Novaer mellons! Farewell til we meet again.

– Signing off, Anne of Lothlorien, The Secret Lady of London

@anne-of-lothlorien
Ahh, bye!!! 🙁 I will definitely miss having you on here! However, I totally, completely, 100% understand. Life gets busy, and you have to do what you have to do. God bless you in your studies and life!

@anne-of-lothlorein
Ahh, bye!!! 🙁 I will definitely miss having you on here! However, I totally, completely, 100% understand. Life gets busy, and you have to do what you have to do. God bless you in your studies and life!

@anne-of-lothlorien *gives goodbye handshake*
Ah, I understand. Life and all. Good luck and goodbye. Hope to see you soon!
-Dragon Snapper