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@kate-flournoy Looks good! I like how the reaction sequence for the second scene makes it look like the king’s EiL is going to lead to disaster. Characters that stick to the right course of action despite opposition and seeming-defeat are awesome.

@audrey-caylin Ah–thanks for catching that! It should be fixed now. 🙂

@anna-brie Oh. xD Okay, yeah, I was thinking about The Land of Elyon series by Patrick Carman. So something completely different.

Yes, having multiple main characters definitely complicates things. We’ll be tackling that in a video later in the series–I’m actually scripting that lesson this week! So if you have any specific questions on having…[Read more]

@graciegirl @ethryndal I once had an extended google session on how long it takes to actually strangle someone (apparently it takes a full three minutes =P), what the proper techniques of strangulation are, and how long someone would be able to hear you if you were taunting them while strangling them…

…so yeah. Google may not trust me anymore. =P

@graciegirl Fiction writing is a great justification for making rather odd purchases. 😉

@winter-rose
Nothing to critique. Brilliantly written and engaging! The ending is very satisfying. Nice work! 🙂

@warrioroftherealm … … … Yeah, I’m not really sure either…. 😛

@warrioroftherealm I looked it up in a book I have explaining bodily injuries for writers and such (Body Trauma: A Writer’s Guide to Wounds and Injuries by David Page if you’re interested in looking it up). It said that the shoulder must be replaced into the socket “before the shoulder muscles go into spasm,” since then it will be more difficult…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper I finished my goal for my paper on MBTI, and I think I’m gonna switch over to an article I’ve been formulating in my head. Are you still on?

Speaking of which, I think I’m going to end now, for anyone who was still here.

@ethryndal The bug has been going around.

@ethryndal Boy, I’m jealous. All I get to do is melt chairs. I did about nada. Wrote 150 words of a plan, and tried writing something, and failed in that. Ugh. *melts chairs*

@winter-rose Cool! Glad you could join.

@graciegirl Wow, a research paper on a character! That’s neat!

@dragon-snapper Okay! I’m here! I have a research paper on MBTI that I really need to work on. 🙂

@winter-rose Yay!

@ethryndal Ah, sorry. I guess dragons don’t know everything after all.

@ethryndal Great! Don’t get a headache. 😀

Sorry, @dragon-snapper. I’d love to but I won’t be free for at least another hour. I’ll join you if you’re still on then. 🙂

@graciegirl @daeus @kate-flournoy @winter-rose @ethryndal
I’m going to be plotting, if anyone wants to join.