Lightningmouse

@kina-lamb @daeus @kate-flournoy @Jason @his-instrument @graciegirl @ethryndal @winter-rose @anyone else who sees this
Back again, yes. Asking for help….hesitantly I have come. But really, I never can decide whether I want to write from third person or first, so I need some dares in first person and others in third person to see if that’ll help…[Read more]

@winter-rose Glad you could join for a bit!

@dragon-snapper @winter-rose I’ll be working on a research paper for at least another 15 mins.

@r-j-wordsmith Awesome! The villain finally understood how to do things right here. *applauds*

@daeus Nice count! I copied down 4 pages worth of transitional phrases (because I really should use more of those) and logged all my characters.
@winter-rose @ethryndal @r-j-Anderson @northerner @graciegirl @Audrey-caylin @overcomer @jess @aella I’m still going.

@daeus Nice count! I copied down 4 pages worth of transitional phrases (because I really should use more of those) and logged all my characters.
@winter-rose @ethryndal @r-j-Anderson @northerner @graciegirl @Audrey-caylin @overcomer @jess @aella I’m still going.

@naomijackson Never to late to make goals. This topic has just begun. 😛
BTW, welcome to the forum!

@R-J-Wordsmith Oh, my goodness, I love it! Brava! This is villainy done right. And the title is hilarious.
I can’t think of any critique. 😀
A villain I can whole-heartedly root for, finally. Great work!

@Ethryndal Zikers! Those drawings on your blog are amazing, Sarah!!! That Galadriel one…wowzers. I love it how only her eyes are colored! And the Rogue one is great too!

@Emma-Flournoy @R-J-Wordsmith

I just have to chip in on this bc Rogue One is my favorite movie of all time. It was beautiful! They all died and it was perfect. Aaannnddd,…[Read more]

@daeus I’m here!

@aratrea Er…It’s an ice-cream giving frog. Not so bad, right? You’re the Wiser (Gandalf like character), Josiah Degrande, and its a long story. 😛
@jane-maree @daeus isn’t really an evil king. He just doesn’t want to see his kingdom destroyed by dragons or by the evil lord and his trolls.

@kate-flournoy I like that development for Eldred not liking hope for that reason. Nice character development there. All those minor characters look good with their Experiments in Living.

Yeah, that’s a pretty insane word count there. =P I have no idea how I’d even begin to write a book that long!

@audrey-caylin Nice–that seems like a very effective way to make him the best villain possible for her arc as she struggles to learn forgiveness. I would say he fits the Tempter type the best.

@overcomer All those theme/focusing question pairs look great! For that last set of focusing questions, they all seem to stem from the common theme of heroship.

@dragon-snapper @daeus @jane-maree How’d I ever get associated with a frog? O.o

Oh yeah, nearly forgot. I wrote 934 words.

@jane-maree @kate-flournoy @daeus Well, I’m done for tonight. I finished the tale, the rough draft, at least. All that’s left is to edit it.
Nobody give @aratrea a frog! 😛 Actually, Daeus, the frog gave you ice cream in the story.

@kina-lamb Great! Glad your liking that dare. 😀

@jane-maree Okay, you know what, I have to include that now. 😛

@daeus Grumpy in that the world is pitted against you. Josiah Degrande (the Wiser) @aratrea and his pet frog do a good job at annoying you.
@jane-maree Hahahaha! Something like that. 😛