Lightningmouse

@r-j-wordsmith
*wild applause* This is hilarious. Seriously. I was grinning the entire time. 🙂
I literally noticed one thing:

“Sir, if you have anything against my height I advise it to keep it to yourself

This should say “I advise you” not “it”. 😉
Great, great work!

@emma-Flournoy Yeah, if Jyn or Cassian had actually gotten to talk with Krennic it would of been pretty cool. I have to admit that, as awesome as he was throughout most of the movie, Krennic was getting annoying by the end. Just get out of our way already! ‘Kay, I’m cool now. I will not rant.
I loved it at the beginning when Galen’s wife ran up…[Read more]

@hope Oh, I like that. A very nice blend of similarities and dissimilarities like that can create really strong foils. You even get some of the benefits of Method #2 as well since while they may both intellectually believe the same things (and thus have the same character arc) in practice they seem to live according to different EiLs, if I’m…[Read more]

@overcomer Haha, that makes sense. Sounds like you’re on the right track! You may find it worthwhile to jump ahead to the ‘How to Handle Multiple Themes in One Story’ lesson in the last module of the course, as that’s where I really address what to do with stories like yours that have multiple themes. Some aspects of the lesson may rely on…[Read more]

@northerner I’m going to hop off now. I editing 12 Word Doc. pages and then wrote 470 words, so I’m happy.

@hope Both of those are awesome ways to connect major characters! I love it.

@hope Nice work. I like the similarities between Hilith and Cedric on that front. Are they both family members?

@kate-flournoy If I wasn’t mistaken, I’d say that you tagged every KP person in existence. 😛

@princessfoo Yaya! Isn’t it great?

@princessfoo Alrighty!
@northerner Glad you could join!

@princessfoo Cool! Let me know if you need me to explain anything about it.

@daeus @kate-flournoy @overcomer @northerner @jane-maree @graciegirl @winter-rose @ethryndal I’m editing henceforth.

@emma-flournoy @aysia-serene @r-j-wordsmith @overcomer @jane-maree @jess @perfectfifths @northerner
Please. I. Need. Moooree. *scrabbles for more*

@aysia-serene Yes. We’s very proud, precious. Very happy. And I’ll take those cookies. 😛
Sooo, what does KP stand for and what does HP stand for?? All I’m getting is Kingdom Pen and Harry Potter. (is that what they’re supposed to mean?)

@dragon-snapper Great job! I’m wrapping it up here too. I revised three of my body paragraphs instead of just the one I set out to do. Read ya later!

@graciegirl Okay, now I’m going to head out, but I rewrote round about 2000 words, which I am very happy with considering my various distractions. How’d your researching go?

@gracie Okay, now I’m going to head out, but I rewrote round about 2000 words, which I am very happy with considering my various distractions. How’d your researching go?

@graciegirl Alright! I’m still at it too! I’m rewriting.

@dragon-snapper Yuppidy-duppidy-do. I’m actually having fun with this research paper so I’m still at it! 😀

@graciegirl Just checking..are you still there?