Lightningmouse

@that_writer_girl_99 Oh, hi! Nice to meet you! *shakes hand vigorously* I’m planning out the scenes in my next novel.

@jane-maree 😛 Excellent. Writer’s of the world, untie! 😉

@daeus @kina-lamb @audrey-caylin @jane-maree @winter-rose @graciegirl @overcomer @kate-flournoy The hour of writing/planning has begun.

@daeus ‘Dreams do come true!’ 😛 That’s great!!!

@daeus Wow! That’s awesome! Rich and famous? 😛

@ethryndal Good idea.
@hope Indeed she does. 😛

@daeus We need a doctor. Shall we hold a vote? 😛

@audrey-caylin Got it. Making that comparison clear to the readers can certainly be very effective even if the protagonist never sees it. Looks good overall!

@audrey-caylin So would you say the father will end up influencing the protagonist away from that POV, then, as she sees that the main reason he believes this is due to his mental disabilities?

@audrey-caylin Nice work. I like Tairock’s EiL and how that connects with the protagonist’s arc. With Tairock’s father, just to clarify, does he have a very similar view of truth because he’s mentally disabled and thus is erroneous in his view due to that disability, or does he have a similar view of truth because his mental disabilities help him…[Read more]

@jane-maree You seem to have a good grasp there on how these scenes are pushing him in his character arc. Those three scenes sound like they work together well then!

@graciegirl Alright. I’m going to try Nykkai (unless someone has claimed her).

@hope And here is Dartagnah. Not sure if he is a likeness or not, but I loved the challenge.

@kate-flournoy Wow! She looks awesome!

@hope My sibling was jumping up and down when she heard that you had come out with a new book. 😛

@aratrea As for Foil characters, can other main characters be foil characters? In my WIP, I don’t have too many characters at all.

@aratrea As for Foil characters, can other main characters be foil characters. In my WIP, I don’t have too many characters at all.

@Audrey-caylin @jane-maree @winter-rose @kate-flournoy @daeus @kina-lamb @graciegirl @r-j-wordsmith @perfectfifths @jess I’ll be planning!

@kate-flournoy I will take that in to mind for the next time I try to write something. Because I care too much. I am a perfectionist.