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@jenali Awesome–thanks for making all that clear. Those look like good foils. I especially like the potential for interplay you have within the antagonists, specifically thinking about Manel and Tekal’s similar views on loyalty. Does Manel take a similar course of action to Tekal (giving gifts) to obtain loyalty, or does he use a different tack?…[Read more]

Thanks for letting me know what works for you all! Sounds like it’s harder to find a good date for everyone this time around. By any chance, would the 19th or the 21st at the same time work any better? If enough people say by Sunday night that one of those times would work better, we’ll do that. Otherwise, we’ll do the 13th or…[Read more]

@jenali Detailing those physical consequences there helps to clarify the poetic justice on that front. Looks good!

@jenali Ah–sorry for not seeing this before! Thanks for the tag. Both of those look great!

@jenali Got it. Thanks for the feedback!

I LOVE THE MTBI! Whenever I create a main character, I always take the test and answer everything how I feel they would.

In my current novel, the main characters are twins named Elisa and Clairen. Elisa is an ENFP, I just discovered (which is what I am) and Clairen is an ISTP (which is almost a complete opposite). It’s sort of a hero/rebel relationship.

I’m thinking Rodyn Rider. Your character sounds a lot like Flynn Rider, and the name goes well.

@theliterarycrusader Interesting request. I shall be done, my liege. On the point of confetti, I already have a name for the farm: KeePer Confetti Farms.
@jess I like the disappearing thing. Maybe that’s how Josiah disappears and appears so quickly.
@hope Haha! @michael-stanton If you read the previous story which this entire thread is about,…[Read more]

@theliterarycrusader Interesting request. I shall be done, my liege. On the point of confetti, I already have a name for the farm: KeePer Confetti Farms.
@jess I like the disappearing thing. Maybe that’s how Josiah disappears and appears so quickly.
@hope Haha! @michael-stanton If you read the previous story which this entire story is about,…[Read more]

@audrey-caylin Thanks!

@audrey-caylin Great!

@daeus @winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 @jess @jane-maree @graciegirl @ethryndal @audrey-caylin I will now proceed to write.

@christi-eaton @that_writer_girl_99 Oh man, I’ve never written a romance.
I’ve got Brianna covered with the bad grammar.
@winter-rose Priceless.
@kate-flournoy One MBTI all knowing character coming right up.

You guys are awesome for inspiration.

@winter-rose Oh! Yes! That is an awesome idea! I know exactly what to do with it! *maniacal laugh* @daeus

@daeus Aha. Would like some more ice cream long with the sequel? 😛
@christi-eaton Hahaha! Yeah…I’m not even sure why I asked that question. 😛 Shall I say its unanimous?

Okay, as there will be an angry mob chasing me if I do not write a sequel, as it would seem, I clearly need to write one. I already have some ideas, but if any of you have…[Read more]

@jadamae Thank you so much!

Alright. How many of you vote for a sequel?