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BlueJay replied to the topic Princess Tess and the Perfect Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 8 months ago
@anna-brie have a read of this story and tell me what you think. I wrote it awhile ago (so I think I’ve improved, but…) I still love it though. 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic From textbook to cinema in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Riiiiight @Daeus. Swahili. You had me fooled for a minute there…
… okay, no, you didn’t. I knew you would know exactly what a Huguenot was. 😉
And yeah, dialogue is a lot easier now that you mention it. I mean, it’s kinda hard NOT to live in the moment when you’re doing a dialogue scene. 😛 *tries to imagine a dialogue scene otherwise* Ugh.…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic From textbook to cinema in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Haha… it’s okay. You are by NO MEANS the first person to do so. It’s a Huguenot name, you might be interested to know… French. 😉
And any scenes I might have of that sort would all be from my very earliest literary endeavors and there is no way on this earth I am posting one of those, but I’ll post a little moment from my WIP you can…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Boiled Potatoes from Blue Sky in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
An order of monks who have taken a vow of cheerful chattering.
You have no idea how hard that made me laugh, @Anna-Brie. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic From textbook to cinema in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Ah, this is a great topic, @Daeus. I know EXACTLY what you’re talking about— only I never had to go through the transition you’re going through now. My books always started as movies in my head— a visual reference to set down on paper, and I wrote it as I saw it, not as I thought it ‘ought to be written’, if you know what I mean.
I don’t…[Read more]
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Greta replied to the topic Boiled Potatoes from Blue Sky in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
@kate-flournoy: Now THAT would be something. 😛
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Greta replied to the topic From textbook to cinema in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
@Daeus: Thanks so much for sharing this! I’ve never really thought about it before, but the example you gave makes a lot of sense. The second example really sucks you into the story because you feel like you’re a part of the story. Like I said, I’ve never really thought about that before. I’ll have to look out for “textbook writing” in my…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Chatter in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
So cute, @sarah-h. Tell your little brother ‘well done.’
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Boiled Potatoes from Blue Sky in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
A merry, cheerful old uncle who wins the heart of his glum, sour, peevish young niece.
And a fantasy uncle (brother to the king and uncle to the prince) who is NOT a usurper. 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Boiled Potatoes from Blue Sky in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Ooh… that would be something @Joy-Schmidt. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Caution: Further Procedure May Result in Allegorical Inspiration in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Good thoughts, everyone. 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Boiled Potatoes from Blue Sky in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Oh @writefury those last two—! Oh man, you need to write those. That would be beyond hilarious.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Boiled Potatoes from Blue Sky in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Or even explaining what a video is! 🙂
My youngest sister adores the old Cinderella. I love the new Cinderella movie. (The acted out one.) Have you seen it? If not, you should. It is great. 😛 -
BlueJay replied to the topic A Writing Game in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
The rain lashed down on my ship. I stood with my paws braced on the deck. Rats scurried around me, fastening things. One of them, the boatswain, slipped on the slippery deck and took a nose dive. He glanced up to find me watching him.
“Capt’n, we need to drop anchor. We are going to die if we continue.”
“Nonsense,” I roared back over the noise of…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Boiled Potatoes from Blue Sky in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
An elephant who just loves mice.
That is so cute @rolena-hatfield. Have you seen the movie Dumbo? That has an elephant who likes a mouse called Timothy. Sweet movie.:)
@anna-brie Are you interested in writing to each other? I can get Kelly to send you my email address if you want.
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Greta posted an update 10 years, 8 months ago
@zoe-wingfeather: Hi, Chloë! So glad you decided to join Kingdom Pen. 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Caution: Further Procedure May Result in Allegorical Inspiration in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Yes, @Belegteleri, totally agree! 🙂 Saying that a man can sincerely serve a false god (nothing more than a delusion of his own erring human brain) and through it serve the one true God in Whom he does not believe is the height of arrogant ignorance.
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Tatiana replied to the topic Caution: Further Procedure May Result in Allegorical Inspiration in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
I totally agree with you, @kate-flournoy. I was talking with a friend recently, and she was asking me all sorts of hard questions about God and life and something like this came up. I don’t remember the exact wording, but I know I said something that if you believe that Jesus Christ is the Son of God and that He died to save you from your sins and…[Read more]
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