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Ingrid replied to the topic I'm rubbish at this… in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 12 months ago
@emily Yeah, I wondered about those parts…thanks for the feedback!
@daughteroftheking *strokes chin* Perhaps, child, perhaps. 😉
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Ingrid replied to the topic Writers' Corner #11 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 12 months ago
*flies in on a gravity-defying contraption not nearly as cool as @daughteroftheking‘s*
@emily I’m sort of working on my WIP while doing other things… 🙂
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Ingrid replied to the topic I'm rubbish at this… in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 12 months ago
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Ingrid started the topic I'm rubbish at this… in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 12 months ago
Honestly, don’t laugh. I’ve never really tried this before (at least, I’ve never tried and succeeded before).
Kindly rip this synopsis apart and put it back together for me, will you? It’s for my WIP.
Fifteen-year-old Jaclyn Fallows’ life has been turned upside down—again.
She understands that much. Sure, she still doesn’t know why she…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 6 years, 12 months ago
@dragon-snapper Noice. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic This Synopsis Thing Needs Critiquing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years ago
@Ethryndal definitely better. I love it just how it is, but as Daeus mentioned, you might cut out the first bit about her step-sister without any damage and probably with benefits.
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Ingrid replied to the topic This Synopsis Thing Needs Critiquing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years ago
@ethryndal *wiggles eyebrows* I wanna read it…although, I feel like I’ve just read the whole book. 😉 It is a tad too long, but that’s nothing a little editing can’t fix. 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic This Synopsis Thing Needs Critiquing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years ago
@Ethryndal your sneaking suspicion is absolutely correct, but otherwise this is absolutely brilliant.
Seriously, and I almost forgave it for being too long because all of it was awesome. So yeah. It’s good. *vigorous nodding*
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Ingrid replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@daeus *highfive* And just for good measure……
🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@Daeus I already said this, but congratulations. 😉
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Ingrid posted an update 7 years ago
Well, I’m back.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Happy Turkey Day! in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
Well. I’m back. *happy sigh*
@dragon-snapper @dekreel @inkling-for-christ @graciegirl and everyone else…
Happy *coughlatecough* Thanksgiving!!!
@ethryndal Hear hear!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic An Interesting Concept I'm Working On in the forum Fantasy 7 years ago
@Dragongeek good point… 😛 Just try to find a power that actually fits with the story for a reason. Don’t just go for super-speed or super-strength ‘because’. Think through what would best fit.
What era/type of names are you looking for?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic School Name? in the forum Publishing & Platform 7 years ago
@Daeus I like that… not as much as Excelsior though.
Ugh. Decisions decisions.
You know what? I’m going to just throw caution to the winds and say go with Excelsior. I can’t think of anything I like better or even as well as. If you can think of a tagline of sorts to go with it though, so it’s more clear what it means and what it’s for, that…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Of Fairytales and Beta-readers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years ago
@Alia hmmm… interesting. Okay. Thank you for pointing that out; I’ll have to look at it again.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic School Name? in the forum Publishing & Platform 7 years ago
@Daeus oooh, I really like the idea behind Excelsior, but most people are probably just going to go… ‘huh? Sounds like some weird Latin elitist club or something… *yawns**scrolls past*’
So… maybe something slightly less high and lofty and a little more down-to-earth. (Can’t believe I just said that.) I can’t think of anything right off the…[Read more]
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Ingrid posted an update 7 years ago
Hey, friends!
Just wanted to give you lovely people a heads-up that I will be eating lots and lots of pie and stuffing this week with family (aka celebrating the American holiday of Thanksgiving). That being said, I will have little time to keep up with the activity here, though I would very much like to. 🙂 Talk to you soon!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Of Fairytales and Beta-readers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years ago
XD Okay… lemme see if I understand you here. You thought that K became ‘evil’ like M, but then K wasn’t evil? And it confused you?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Of Fairytales and Beta-readers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years ago
@Alia did it? How so?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Kingdom's History in the forum Start HERE 7 years ago
@Dekreel here. *hands you ice-cream* I think I can do that because I’m pretty sure they made me secretary or… something. 😛
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