Levi Pierpont

*sigh* @Hope

I need a flashing button on my keyboard that blares the words ‘DO NOT FORGET TAG’ at me every time I make a post.

@bluejay yay!! Seems pretty good to me… 😉

@kate-flournoy @daeus 708. A slow start as it is a new story, so I had some working out to do, but it began to move along as time went by.

@Daeus awesome. Finished the book yet?

I like it! 😀 Only thing I would look out for is adjectives in the first sentence— I am so one to talk, but thrilling and inspiring are pretty similar so I would cut one or the other.

@Daeus @bluejay 904 words, which I consider pretty good for editing. What did you guys get?

@bluejay yes, roughly. 🙂

9:30 is in roughly 35 minutes?? @daeus @kate-flournoy. Cause I can continue that long.

@Daeus @bluejay me too! Till 9:30?

‘The girl was just sitting there— legs dangling over the edge of the bridge, slumped dejectedly beneath the weight of a soggy black hoodie.
Cobalt scratched his nose. Not the safest of places to sit. Maybe she was lost. Tugging lightly on his draggled, jewel-toned scarf, he got up from his bench and crossed to her side of the bridge. “Hey,” he…[Read more]

Woohoo! @daeus. I can write now. 🙂

Yes, @Adry_Grace! Very good point.

A few quick things I love about this short— one, the body language is amazing.
Two, the structure is perfect. We open with a bored musician obviously waiting for someone to come along and make his effort worthwhile— something instantly wanted. Enter little girl with coin; want becomes must have. The stakes…[Read more]

‘One… two… three… my tongue lolled nervously out between my jaws, and I crouched lower in the gutter. Not a very nice place to be, granted… but I was desperate.
There it was. Right across the street. Taunting me. Drawing me on to my certain demise.
I whined deep in my throat, choking on my tongue and slapping it up juicily around my teeth.…[Read more]

@Hope phewfk… that would just kill me.

Good example from Lysbeth— I hadn’t remembered that. And I agree one hundred percent with your conclusions.

Which sadly means this topic is nearing its demise.

Noooooo!!!!!! Someone do something! *hysterical panting* I don’t want to stop talking about deep things!!!

Yes it is, @bluejay— Pixar’s ‘Lifted’. It’s absolutely hysterical.

BTW @kate-flournoy, is that video clip from a short??? Cause I think I’ve seen it and it was soooo good. 😀

We need to have a doctor on staff when Tessa’s asleep and I’m not qualified.

It’s weird to have someone write that you’re asleep. Anyway I’m here. Definitely green. But only the alien will stay green @daeus. It is quite normal, although I think @kate-flournoy to it to another level, for someone to turn green when sick with shock. So @hope, you…[Read more]

@daeus, no problems. We can try tomorrow. 🙂

Ooh @hope those are so fun… 🙂