Levi Pierpont

@allison-grace  I am back from the dead (aka Christmas break)!  This question is for a more experienced writer than myself, but I definitely agree with what @that_writer_girl_99 said about making it real.  Sorry, I know I’m not very helpful, but honestly this is tough for me too!

@seekjustice you’re totally fine. 😉 Thanks for the good wishes. 🙂

@rochellaine no no, it’s fine. XD

Longfellow has some really great stuff. Tennyson too, though I haven’t read as much of it. Mostly just The Lady of Shalott. ;P

@rochellaine welcome to the bestistest place on the internet! I love singing too. 😀 Do you like poetry? Do you know your MBTI type? What’s your favorite genre?

@inklings-for-christ I think that’s a fantastic idea! I probably won’t be able to chime in much, but otherwise, go for it. 😀

All KeePers and Kapeefers alike, I can also seriously recommend this course. Click it. Sign up. Do the thing.

@Winter-rose perfect. 🙂

@winter-rose eh… close enough. ;P

@jenwriter17 well first of all, I must have somehow missed your introduction cuz I don’t remember saying hello. Hello, and welcome. 😉 I’m an old timer here, but I haven’t been around much lately due to crazy life. I’m so pleased to see new faces filling in.

Writing goals… *whimpering laugh*

Oh boy.

1. FINALLY get the third draft of the book…

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@Winter-Rose nineteen this coming March… how close are we? 😛

@mariposa *chokes on her left-over Christmas gingerbread and faints into the eggnog*

Oh wow… I… I don’t even know what to say…

@Winter-Rose I love how you tied it together at the beginning and end; nice work. 😀

Overall, I think it’s pretty strong. I do think you could cut this one line: Before he can drop the mission killers close in, confronting him with a choice. Will he run from the men who want Amy dead, or will he remain and risk repeating a past defeat he wishes…[Read more]

@winter-rose *props chin on fist and looks up at you with enormous, adoring brown eyes* When I grow up, I wanna write like you.

That. Was. Awesome.

@Introvert_girl good question. I haven’t given this a ton of thought, but my gut says you would have to acknowledge to the reader that this is different.

You can’t let the new characters try to fill the shoes of the old ones; it won’t work. You should make it clear that this is their story now… and that the world has changed to need them as…[Read more]

@bethanysinkyroses heyyyyyyy, welcome back! I was wondering where you went. 😀

@Catwing *laughs crazily* Whoo, this is getting nuts. XD I love it.

@sam-kowal gaahhhh, I love it! *dies laughing*

No seriously, this is adorable. And hilarious. I want more.

@notawriter  Welcome!  I’m a little late (I was on an unofficial hiatus), but I’m here now!!!  Can’t wait to see you around the forum!

@Daeus yep, #2.

@Daeus *deep breath* Okay, I’m doing this. Wish me luck.