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The Impossible Girl replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 I’m an INTJ. My dominant functions are Ni-Te. I am literally the NIGHT (NiTe). Keep the sun away from me! 😛
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The Impossible Girl replied to the topic Hi there! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 5 months ago
@moriahs Oh. Hey. Welcome to KP! I love photography too! (and Photoshop…). That sounds so cool being able to take photos of African landscapes and animals. I’m sure you’ll enjoy being a part of the KP community heaps.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Ah, yes, the shows that were around when I was little were the good ones. 😛
@daeus I’m signing out now. I wrote about 850 words, not much of it being dialogue, but I think it’s good action, so I’m happy with it. -
The Impossible Girl replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Great idea. The world will be killed through my words…
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Strangely, yes. I think there was one episode where Emily Elizabeth was throwing a party and her ‘friend’ wanted her to add more pizzazz, and she’d wiggle her fingers fancily whenever she’d say it, and as a little kid, that word stuck out as interesting. 😛
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 I think of Clifford.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@daeus Well, that’s always important. Pizzazz. I’ll have to use that word.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@daeus Well, that’s always important. Pizzazz.
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The Impossible Girl replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@jenali Haha. The introverts will rule the world! Just after I finishing writing this book…
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The Impossible Girl replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 5 months ago
@emma-flournoy @kate-flournoy @daeus @winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 @jane-maree Here is the FULL Prologue and Chapter 1. I didn’t actually provide the entire of Chapter 1 before. Tell me what you think.
Prologue
Halle’s heart raced. They’re coming. They’re coming for me. Her hair flew out behind her, blending with the browns and greens of the a…[Read more] -
The Impossible Girl replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 5 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 I meant that Supergirl got a bit stupid. Sorry.
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The Impossible Girl replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 5 months ago
@daeus @emma-flournoy @winter-rose @kate-flournoy @jane-maree The entirety of the Prologue and Chapter 1 (I didn’t actually give you guys the whole of Chapter 1 to begin with):
Prologue
Halle’s heart raced. They’re coming. They’re coming for me. Her hair flew out behind her, blending with the browns and greens of the autumn forest. She leapt over…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@daeus I thought you already had that covered. You know, campaigning?
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 *pats you on the back* Don’t worry, its very helpful in the end. (or at least, I think it is)
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 5 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Yup, that’s better. 🙂
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 For my first novel, I managed not to do so, but now I’m falling into that black hole and being turned into spaghetti. Why can’t words be perfect the first time?
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
… What did you guys do while I was out? I said no crazy parties! Security shall look out for danger in the form of TV shows.
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The Impossible Girl replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 5 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 @christi-eaton Comic-book geek here. I’m not really a fan of the CW series. I did watch Flash and Supergirl for a little while, but… it got a bit stupid. I like superheroes because they’re superheroes. We don’t need romance!
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The Impossible Girl replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 5 months ago
@emma-flournoy Good point. ‘She leapt over the fence and cried out in pain as her hair caught in the wire’s deadly barbs. Grunting with frustration, she drew her knife and with one quick slash, the tangled orange mass was left behind.’
True about the muttering… Weird. In my actual document, I don’t have a comma after ‘Aunt’. Must’ve been a typo. -
Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Oh, tell me about it. I am such a perfectionist.
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