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@Mariposa This brought tears to my eyes. A true masterpiece.

@Dragon-snapper *brandishes fork* HA, joke’s on you. My chairs are specially engineered to withstand dragon fire. *inspects fingernails and flicks a speck of dust from her shoulder* Better luck next time, my dear.

@Leumeister Somehow I don’t think this will be helpful. XD But I like Camille, Raphael, and Lachlan. Especially Lachlan for the last guy. Which is bad because that has the least votes, and is therefore, not helpful. ;P But it really seems to fit him. The other two do too, but not in extreme like Lachlan did when I read it. And those sound like…[Read more]

@Leumeister I’m pretty sure my eleven year old brother is headed this direction. 😉 He’s writer material, and has stories in his head, but has professed a deep hate of doing the actual writing (though he loves practicing his handwriting, which is a rather strange thing). So he wishes he had a movie-making program where he could just make his…[Read more]

@Mariposa Nice. XD I’m pretty sure I guessed most of the people implicated.

@Winter-Rose Whoa. I’ll definitely be praying for you. <3

“Fear not, for I am with you, be not dismayed, for I am your God. I will strengthen you, yes, I will help you; I will uphold you with My righteous right hand.” Isaiah 41:10

@dekreel, any ideas on how I can tweak them? And which ones need major tweaking?

@dekreel, I’m signing off

@dekreel, I don’t just not like it, I loath it. Though I will have to admit J. K. Rowling is an amazing author. I’ve never actually read any of the books, but I have read parts and @charisetter has told me enough of the story.

*quickly grabs a bowl full of ice cream before its all taken*

pretty good I guess, my characters are actually obeying me. they must have heard that my othe story got put on probation.

@dekreel, hows it going for you?

@dekreel, LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT minus the HP reference…

@supermonkey42, you’re building a full-size R2-D2? Seriously jealous right now.

@dekreel, I’m writing, sorta….

*brings out the pie and ice cream*

@dekreel

* Westing Game by Somebody I can’t remember

* Wormling Series by Jerry B. Jenkins and Chris Fabry

* Detectives in Togas by Somebody I can’t remember

Hi!

Honestly, I don’t think having two villains is a problem. Lots of books, TV shows, and movies get away with it. Often, they come at it through an insubordinate/superior light, where one person is just doing what their told based on what their superior instructs, but I’m sure there are other ways you could go about such a thing.

@dekreel, I’ll be praying

@Winter-Rose Wow… that’s a tough decision, but super exciting. My brother has grappled with the choice of college himself, and I know how hard it can be. It’s incredibly brave of you to buck the traditional, pressured paths of society to pursue writing, and I’ll definitely be praying for you. May God strengthen and encourage you through this…[Read more]

Hello,

A couple thoughts…

–I believe someone above mentioned that posting this in such a huge block of text makes it very difficult to read and comprehend. Maybe using something like Google Docs would be more beneficial to you in the future…

–I found myself skimming over the chapters as time went on. This may have to do with how long it…[Read more]

@jane-maree, I’m signing off and taking the remaining pizza with me

@daughteroftheking, fare thee well fellow fashion savvy person.

I think I’ll probably end up making Eritrea her name and Estia her undercover name, or vice verse. thanks for your input