@kyronthearcanin
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Very interesting! Is Kyrah different from Kirah?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@esther-c @awsumfaith @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @kyronthearcanin
Rampart
His eyes blinked open.
Darkness…… and not an Imperial facility.
The two glow-scales on his temples brightened to give him some more light.
The structure didn’t seem to be made by any dragon, in fact. Many of the…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@kyronthearcanin Thanks! The webbing on his hands is because he’s a sea dragon, so it helps him swim better.
@esther-c @awsumfaith @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 Also there’s one detail I forgot about him. On the end of his tail, he tied a needle-sharp horn from a narwhal-like creature as a…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Alright. 🙂
Derek
“Nice to meet you, Derek!” Madeline said enthusiastically. “I’m sure we’ll soon be best friends.”
Derek nodded, keeping his forced smile. He glanced over at the tall man. But maybe you and I won’t be great friends, he thought.
“Oh, that’s just Sam,” Madeline explained. “Don’t mind him. He doesn’t talk anymore. But…[Read more]
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Allison posted an update 1 year, 7 months ago
@esther-c @kyronthearcanin @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @euodia-vision @mineralizedwritings @landric @booksbyjayna @landric
Hi! Im not going to be on KP to much this week. We are driving cross country and getting to our stops pretty late. Ill be on as often as I can, but it might take me a while to reply! -
TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Looking good! I don’t think your alluding to the idea of Brycen being one of the chosen here, other than the fact that the the story is told from the perspective of the other two chosen. And using the description of draconic for Tali would further increase suspicions that she’s the dragonborn, that being now two implied…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@esther-c @awsumfaith @kyronthearcanin @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 All righty, that’s three votes for the “paranoid dragon”…..so let’s meet him! I won’t be able to RP as him yet, but I’ll try for tomorrow.
Name: Admiral Rampart (first name unknown)
Appearance and traits: A dark green and…[Read more]
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Light Warrior Pen replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
I’m a fan of the paranoid dragon
Everyone else:
Your characters are awesome!
@esther-c @awsumfaith @kyronthearcanin @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @anyone else on here.
Okay, here’s my insane anti-hero
Name: Violet Maxwell
Occupation: thief/break-in expert
Looks: Brunette hair,…[Read more]
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Faith replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Oooo, great cliffhanger! I’m excited for more
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Haha, lol! Yeah, It makes sense that Amara would be the dragonborn because of Jade, but it seemed very likely that you were alluding to Tali, because only dragons were seen, then suddenly a human, thus, that human must be draconic in some way. I think I would personally prefer the latter if I was writing this, but I think it…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Interesting, I’m really liking this so far! So a few questions I feel are becoming relevant to the story as a whole:
Are the dragons inherently evil, or are they simply a corrupt nation? What is their motives in invading Illura?
I was going to ask about who the dragonborn was, but then reading through some previous messages, I…[Read more]
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Faith replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
I love this! Its very intriguing, I can’t wait to read more! And I just love the names you chose for everyone, im a name nerd XD.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@esther-c @awsumfaith @kyronthearcanin @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12
So, since I’m having serious trouble deciding who to add, I’ll let you choose for me. Would you rather have a manipulative and fierce but slightly paranoid dragon officer who has a bone to pick with my MCs? Or would you rather…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@kyronthearcanin Thanks! Yours seems cool too! I love the whole fire spirit idea
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Loopy replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@esther-c @awsumfaith @kyronthearcanin @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12
Actually, I’ll just make Maddie completely powerless since she isn’t in her own world. Also, I completely messed up and called the other character Ben. His name is Sam. I don’t know why I did that.
Sam
Sam stared at his h…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@esther-c @awsumfaith @kyronthearcanin @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
I really want to add Madeline, but she’s a literal cartoon. Unless I made a human version of her… *shudders at the thought*
Ok, yeah, I’m doing this.
Madeline: looks like she’s about 7 years old, about 3 and a half feet tall, wearing a plain white knee-le…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Oh, yes!!! The accent!!!🤣🤣
Yes, IKR?! 🤣🤣
I love that little story!! 😂
Reminds of a certain…Neverending Story perhaps??? 🤣🤣
What’s that? I’ve never heard of it, sry. 😅
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @esther-c @keilah-h @kyronthearcanin @whoever-else-is-on-here XD
ok y’all…I’m really excited about this and I have some villains/antagonists/antihero’s I wanna put in but like I mentioned before they’re from different timelines.
Character castle isn’t really a “Make Sense” kinda place anyway XD so would y’all mind if f…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@esther-c @awsumfaith @kyronthearcanin @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
Ok, so I’m not likely to be on here as much, but I have a couple characters I might add. They’ll be dragons, so should I make them their actual size (six to seven feet on average, and that’s on four talons) or should I make them human-sized?
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Alrighty! Have fun! 🙂
Alright! 🙂 Hope you have fun!! 😀
Enjoy your trip!
How was your trip?
Hi! I’m soooooooo sorry that it took me so long to respond. We have no internet at our new house and we are getting it in a bit longer than a week. KP doesn’t work very well on my phone at all, so I’ll try to be on in a week! I miss you all!